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Tzen
Posts : 11 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 39 Location : I sleep in trees
| Subject: Zen Uchiha's Hasaki Shinku Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:41 am | |
| Name of Weapon or Item: Hasaki Shinku, or Crimson Edge Owner: Zen Uchiha Location: Attached to his back, there is a strap(it's not shown in the picture) that goes around his shoulder and holds the blade into place. Rank: C Description/Abilities: The only thing special is that it's two swords in one, a smaller one that's more focused on speed and precision, and the larger sword focused on power and coverage. The smaller sword can be reattached to the larger sword by sliding it back into place where the slot is on the guard of the sword. Starting out, however, he can only use the smaller sword because he is still training to be more skilled in weaponry. History: Before Zen graduated from the academy, his father decided to get him a present made just in case the day comes. The quality of the weapon is pretty high considering the months it took to make it. The blacksmith who made the weapon used some of the finest metals around to create its sharp edge, adding in different designs to give it a very unique look. He wrapped bandages around the handles to help with grip, putting the rest of the bandages he didn't really want on the blade itself as some sort of backup. Because of how big it is altogether, the probably of it breaking is slim, but it is only a weapon, and weapons are only as good as their user. Appearance:
Last edited by Tzen on Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:31 am; edited 1 time in total |
| | | Kiyoshi Raikage
Posts : 627 Join date : 2011-01-29 Age : 31 Location : Coconut Creek, FL
| Subject: Re: Zen Uchiha's Hasaki Shinku Tue Feb 15, 2011 5:40 am | |
| The fact that they're two weapons in one doesn't make them a united entity, you need to make them seperate weapons and explain within each of them what they can do (I.e. attach themselves to on another) |
| | | Tzen
Posts : 11 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 39 Location : I sleep in trees
| Subject: Re: Zen Uchiha's Hasaki Shinku Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:31 pm | |
| Is it really necessary to separate those two? There's nothing much different like the history would be the same and everything Thats why I did it as one to make things neater and easier But if you want me to post it again and be repetitive, I will |
| | | Kiyoshi Raikage
Posts : 627 Join date : 2011-01-29 Age : 31 Location : Coconut Creek, FL
| Subject: Re: Zen Uchiha's Hasaki Shinku Wed Feb 16, 2011 3:50 pm | |
| I didn't actually get a chance to explain myself correctly because of a rush, but what I meant was that I noticed your character didn't have weaponry as a specialty and as it stands, the weapon rules say that Gennin without the specialty can only have 1 so you need to separate thenm, get rid of one and the potentially obtain it after ranking up (Or switch over to Weaponry as a specialty) |
| | | Tzen
Posts : 11 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 39 Location : I sleep in trees
| Subject: Re: Zen Uchiha's Hasaki Shinku Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:32 am | |
| Oh I see that makes much more sense than what you told me before lol Alright, I added a sentence that said he can only use the smaller sword for now. |
| | | Shiro Hazuki Mizukage
Posts : 233 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Zen Uchiha's Hasaki Shinku Sat Apr 23, 2011 9:42 pm | |
| Well I guess since this matter was resolved, I guess I should officially approve it, no?
Approved unless said otherwise. |
| | | Satsuriku S-Rank Criminal
Posts : 319 Join date : 2011-05-12 Age : 37 Location : Hekla
| Subject: Re: Zen Uchiha's Hasaki Shinku Sun Aug 07, 2011 12:03 pm | |
| Archived due to user's inactivity ~ |
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