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The Dragon of Kumogakure


Kumogakure Shinobi



|Basics|



Name: Cid
    Nickname/Aliases: Tetsuryuu, Rairyuu, Hunk-kun for the ladies.

Age: 39
    Physical Age: 34
    Mental Age: 39

Gender: Male
Birthplace: Land of Earth
Previous Residence: Kirigakure no Sato in the Land of Water and a small village in the Land of Earth.
Clan: Yoshitsu [No Bloodline or anything, just a regular family where all of its members, or at least most of them, are shinobi.]



||Appearance|


General Appearance:
Cid is a quite tall, handsome elderly man, always in the same kind of clothing. Though, at some times, he does like to have a bit of an attire change. But, that happens rarely and only if he goes outside of his village or in special occasions. Even though it does not seem like it, Cid actually takes his position quite seriously. His attire, it represents that. He is always wearing clothes fit of a shinobi like him, the Kumogakure no Sato headband is always somewhere visible. Most of the times he has it on his forehead, while sometimes he wraps it around his arm. Due to his long shinobi service he has gained numerous battle scars all over his body, from his face, all the way till his toe. Yup, this man sure has a lot of them. Though, these scars make him look even better than he would look without them, they are a part of him which some ladies like the most. Either way, it is something that makes Cid into what he is. Fun fact, his largest scar is located on his chest, it goes all the way from his manhood till the center part of his chest. But, it ain't straight, it goes from left to right.

As I mentioned somewhere else in this application, Cid takes his shinobi duties seriously. In order to be able to protect his village and his Kage he had trained his body to become a weapon, focusing more on brute strength than anything else. Well, he certainly does use his intellect in a battle. But, intellect alone can not help a person to win a battle. Sometimes it can, but not always. Because of that he spent a lot of time training and due to that he gained a quite muscular built. Though, that really doesn't seem to be a problem for him, since due to the fact that most of it is muscle mass he can keep his speed at a rather high level. Well, to those of his Rank that would be their usual level of speed. But, his large muscles do cause a lot of damage when they hit.

There is one more thing which is important for this part, concerning his appearance and facial expressions in different situations. As you can see from the picture which was submitted with this application, Cid seems to be a man who does not show emotions. But, he actually does, with different emotions his facial expression changes. Most of the time, he appears to be calm and relaxed, as if he has no care in the world. No matter if he is happy or sad, the expression on his face will aways stay calm and collected. But, when he gets enraged and filled with negative emotions, his pupil will widen, his fist will get tightened and his teeth will clench. On the other hand, when he is attempting to charm women, his eyes will narrow and his voice will gain a smoothing tone, while his touch will become gentle and smoothing.

Clothes are shown in the picture bellow.

    Height: Well, he never actually wanted to know that, since to him it wasn't so important. But, in the official records it says that he is a meter and ninety centimeters tall.

    Weight: Judging from his muscle mass and his size, you could say that he is pretty heavy. During the last time when his weight was measured his weight reached one hundred kilo.

    Eye Color: He has light blue eyes.

    Hair Color & Style: The color of Cid's hair is snow-white. Although he has some parts which are somewhat silver. His hair style is messy, meaning he has no hair style and he just lets his hair to grow the way it wants to. Indeed, Cid is one of those men who don't really care about how they look.

Gallery:
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||Personality|



Overall Personality:
Cid is quite dedicated to his village and his clan. He follows the traditions of his clan and serves his village with great loyalty. As a dedicated follower of the clan traditions, he will never kill a fellow Clan member or a fellow member of his village. Since he is the leader of the clan, he is able to issue a execution order of those clan members who have broken the rules and the traditions of the Clan. But, instead of killing those members, he is also allowed to a few other punishments. Due to his own personal nature, Cid will try to evade the death sentence and always try to decide any kind of other punishment as long as it does not include death of a fellow clan member. He will do the same when it comes to fellow village members trying to leave their village and become rogue. Cid always has mercy over his countrymen and his fellow clansmen. Due to that some consider him to be rather weak and soft hearted, something that does not seem to be a good trait among shinobi. But, Cid is always true to himself, so he will never betray his way of life or his beliefs.

His personal nature, it is quite simple. Cid is a quite nice and caring kind of guy. He enjoys reading books, so you could say that most of his free time he spends in the village library. While, the rest of the free time he likes to spend somewhere in the canyons, relaxing and enjoying his time. Even though due to his job he does not have much free time, he never complains. Cid is not a lazy type of person, he has nothing against spending most of his time by working on different assignments. Whatever task he gets, he will always dedicate himself to that task, trying to complete it no matter what. That means, if he has to do something that he does not like, he will still do it. His dedication to his job and to his clan, they actually were the aspects which made him the leader of his clan. Just because of those facts, the former leader selected him to take over.

When it comes to communication with other people, he is quite a open person. He likes people and he likes talking to them about all sorts of different topics. Mostly, he likes to talk about music and village politics. As a high ranking village official, he is obliged to be informed about all of the happenings inside and outside the village. Also, as the leader of the Steel Release Clan he also keeps an eye on all of the clan members and always trying to get them out of trouble. Every day Cid enjoys having a coup of tea with some of the members of his clan, socializing and letting them to express their problems concerning clan and village related issues. He is a type of person who likes to listen to what people are saying to them, taking a note from everything. Then, when they are done, he usually makes a conclusion of some sort. Usually a helpful advice or/and a solution of some kind.

Among those most simple aspect of his personality, Cid has yet another part of him which he shows the most. Like many straight men, he loves handsome and young big breasted women. But, unlike most men who stick to one female who they call a girlfriend, he loves to have a lot of women. Indeed, he is a type of men who women like to call a 'womanizer'. This aspect of him is responsible for a lot of the actions which he takes, it even differs him from the rest of the members of his clan. His love for women sometimes even gets in the way of his job, even though he tries not fall in love with handsome enemy female spies, sometimes he just will not be able to do so. At times like that, he likes to flirt instead of fight. If that doesn't work, he would simply knock her out and take her hostage, constantly trying to make her fall in love with him. Though, Cid doesn't have any problems with killing people, as long as they are not women.

    Favorite Quote/Saying: N/A

    Hobby:
    Reading - Cid loves reading, it is one of the few things that could relax him and one of his good hobbies. Since he is actually smart, he realizes the value of knowledge.
    Daydreaming - This is one of his a bit nasty habits, which he got from his father. His father was also a type of person who loved to daydream when he had nothing else to do. Well, Cid is just like that, he has a habit of daydreaming while filling out all those mission reports.
    Seducing women - Another one of them nasty habits, from which he earned most of his wounds. Truth to be told, Cid was slapped by some girl who he was hitting on more times than he was punched by someone who he was attempting to beat in a battle. But, even so, he still keeps trying to seduce young and pretty women, something which he thinks of as a hobby.

    Favorite Color: Green - Since he is so much like the wind, he considers green to be his color, and that is why it is his favorite color. Though, he does not care much about colors, well he doesn't care about them at all. But, just if anyone wonders, green will be the color which he likes the most.

    Fears: Cid is a man with no fears. He is a Christian and therefore he believes into God and the afterlife, meaning dying is not something that he is afraid of, nor does he dislike it. Through out his life he will live like every day is his last day on earth, enjoying every bit of it, without a fear or a care in his life. He thinks that he will go either to Hell or Heaven. But, sometimes, he is pretty much believes that he will go to the word in between those two.

    Goals: A carefree person who lives one day at a time, naturally has no goals, or a couple of small ones. Well, Cid is just like the wind, a person with no care in the world, living just so he could live and experience life. He does not care if he dies early in his life or later on when he grows old. This elderly shinobi is not one of those who wish to have more power or to get some high position, all he cares is that his day ends up becoming full with things to do. Well, you could say that he has a goal somewhat, which is "never to be bored in life". That is his one and only goal, if that could even be considered as a goal.



||Rank Information|


Letter Rank: A-Rank
Ninja Rank: Jōnin [Jounin or Jonin]

||Skill Information|


Elemental Affinity:
    Dominant: Raiton [Lighting Release viz Lighting Style]
    Recessive: Doton [Earth Release viz Earth Style]



Skill Specialty
    Dominant: Taijutsu
    Recessive: Weaponry [Exotic]


Special Characteristics:
Spoiler:

Traits:
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||History|


Family: Most of his actual family died, all that is left of his family is a bunch of distant relatives.
History:
The young Cid was born in a small village, in the Land of Earth, one of five great nations. His village was very small, and it was surrounded by tall mountains, and large rivers. All people in that village were pour, and most of them had no food, or water. The village was ruled by a fat government official. He kept all food and money for himself, not giving anything to the villagers, and their families. Cid's parents were pour farmers, who served that fat man, and lived in dirt. Their house was small, and they had enough supplies, just barely to survive. After some time, the government official who ruled the land decided to make his own personal army, which he will use to kill the Daimyo of the Land of Earth. But, he knew that nobody from that village was strong enough to become a ninja, or ready to help him. So, he decided to do something else. Knowing how the place was filled with little kids, he decided to take all of them, and raise them as his personal soldiers. For that, he had a couple of older shinobi who worked for him. They were once Jounin Sensei in the Stone village, but now they were outcasts. Those two would do anything for a good pay, so that would explain why were they working for him. The attack was set up to happen over the night, while everyone was sleeping.

During that night, the young Cid was somewhat 7 years old, sleeping with his parents. While his gentle blue eyes were closed, an explosion occurred in the nearby area, waking up everyone in the village. When his parents heard this, the quickly woke up, dressing up themselves and their child. At the moment, they were only thinking about the safety of their son, not concerning about their lives. Cid was their priority, so they quickly dressed him up, placing him in his chair so they could tell him something. After a few minutes, the whole family came through the door of their hose, running towards the forest. As they were running, they could see people being attacked by the forces of the government official, they were everywhere. Knowing that they did not have a chance to escape, the parents of the young Cid sent their soon alone into the woods, with the instructions where to go. At that time, they stayed behind, stopping the bad guys to get near their soon. Without taking any seconds to look back, Cid entered the forest, disappearing out of sight.

After leaving the village, the young boy thought that his parents were dead, killed in the attack. Even so, he still hoped that they were still alive, even though that was not possible. The instructions given to the young boy were about an old house in the mountains, and how to reach it. According to his parents, this was the place where his parents lived with his grandparents, a long time ago. Maybe they were still alive, so he hoped to find them and live there from now on. But, the reality was quite different. After reaching that house, he found the house empty, with nobody there. No food, no water, only clothes and some strange looking swords. According to his parents, Cid's grandfather used to be a Ninja for the Hidden Mist Village, and those were his swords. That was the moment when he decided to become a ninja as well. But, first he needed to train.

During the time after the death of his parents, the young Cid was crushed by this tragic. He used to think how his life was quite perfect. But now, he was thinking will he even survive the night. The nights at the Land of Earth were so cold and scary. For a young boy like himself, living in a dark and empty house, alone, it was quite frightening. He hopped that all of it was some kind of dream and that he will wake up soon, so he could hug his parents and other people who he knew from the village. But, nothing was happening, he was not waking up. To survive in this harsh times, the young Cid had to hunt for food and search the land for water. The soldiers took all food and water from the village, leaving him nothing. He could not rely on anyone except himself, that was a fact which he made his mot at moments like this. Even so, Cid still hoped to find someone out there, just so he could have someone to talk with. Eventually, he started forgetting how to say some words, even the ability of speech was leaving him. Noticing this, Cid got an idea how to prevent this. By using a knife which he found in the former house of his parents, the young boy made a dummy out of the woods and clothes which he found. After it was finished, he started talking to it, just so he could remember how to do it.

With that problem solved, the young man only had one more problem to solve. That was, getting food and water supply. At first he thought how he should get food by picking berries and mushrooms from the forest. But then, when he started that, the young boy remembered how some of this plants were dangerous. Some of them were poisonous, so he could not just pick them up and eat them, some other ways had to be found. Eventually, he found a small lake near the area in which he was, somewhat in the valley bellow the mountain. In it he found supplies of water and lots of fish swimming in it. So, now that he solve all of the main problems, training could start. To reach the Land of Water, the young man had a long way in front of him. Not only that, the path was quite difficult due to the fact that he had to cross the ocean in order to reach the main land. In order to do that he needed money for the boat ticket. But, the young boy did not have any money, he had to earn it somehow. To do that, he had no other options that stealing the money from someone. The first person which he came across was an old fat rich guy, who was going around saying how rich he was. Knowing how people like him are ruthless and evil, Cid decided to rob him. Judging by the fact that he had two guards, it was not supposed to be easy, but the young boy did not have any other choices.

A few hours later, the young boy could be walking through the streets of the town, eating some kind of fruits. The outcome of the battle seemed to be long decided, with Cid the winner. With money gained from the rich guy, he was now able to buy a ticket for Kirigakure no Sato. When Cid reached the only boat which was leaving to Kiri, he simply bought a ticket with the newly gained money, boarding the boat afterwards. There he found a lot of people leaving their home land due to the fight between war lords over power. Sad after hearing out some of their stories, the young boy set on one of the empty spaces, blacking out into a deep slumber. When he woke up, Cid found himself in the beautiful land of the water. After getting out of the boat, he left directly towards its capital, the Kirigakure no Sato, where the Mizukage office was. There, he hopped to find someone who could tell him how to get into the Ninja Academy and become a ninja. It took him a while, but he found the village and the ninja academy, all thanks to one person who he found along the way. The man who he met was a Jounin in Kirigakure no Sato, who helped Cid to get to the village. After that, he reunited the young boy with his parents, who were alive after all. Happy with that outcome, the young boy signed into the academy, hoping that he will make his family proud.

During the first day in the ninja academy, the young boy made a couple of friends, which also shared the same background. They were also from the Land of Earth, running from the fight of the war lords in that country. Al three of them soon became quite good friends, even ending up in a squad together. This was due to the little help of the Jounin who helped him in his quest. This Jounin also became their sensei, who all three of them learned to like. Later on they found out that he is one of the Seven Swordsman of the Mist. That little information made all three of them proud about their sensei. After learning everything about each other, the young Genin squad was able to start doing combos like they could read each others mind. The bond between them got so strong that even their sensei could not believe how incredible it was. Even so, with their bonds reaching the highest level of friendship, the young Genins also started to get stronger. Not even a year had passed, and they were already able to perform B-Ranked missions on their own. At occasions like that, their sensei would simply step back from the mission, hiding in the shadow and watching them complete their missions perfectly. At some point tears would flow from his eyes after watching a perfectly completed mission, he was damn proud of them.

In the squad they formed, Cid was the weapon and Taijutsu expert. Since he was a weaponry user, their sensei was the one who thought him most of his techniques, due to his connection with the seven swordsman of the mist organization. Since he was one of the members, the older Jounin was considered as one of the best Weapon experts in the village, which had a great influence on Cid. From all the techniques and strategies which he knew, Cid learned most of it from his sensei, who payed a lot of attention to him. Of course, he did train his other two students, but the young Yakumo was his favorite student who he thought everything. As Cid grew, his sensei was more and more proud of him, since he was becoming an exact copy of his sensei.

Even thought they were one of the strongest Genin teams in the village, Cid and his squad decided to skip the Chuunin Exam for that year and try out next year. The reason for that was their wish to complete more missions in order to visit more different villages and to meet more different ninjas from other villages, thus gaining more knowledge about their strengths and weaknesses. Respecting their wishes, their sensei supported them and he decided to train them even harder so they may become even stronger. Again, his fullest attention was directed to Cid, who learned how to master even more weaponry techniques, gaining his own style of weapon usage and his favorite weapon type. After a year, the day of the Chuunin exams finally arrived, they day which they were waiting for with so much expectation. The location of that Chuunin Exam was in Kirigakure, so the young Squad had the advantage of the area, since they knew the whole advantages and disadvantages of their Land and Village. Due to that, the first two exams, which were field exams, they passed with not so much problems. In that time, only Yuki, the female member of the squad got a small wound. Other than that, they were all fine, ready to continue.

In the third round, Yuki fell out in a all out battle against a Genin from Kumogakure, who used Lightning against her Earth Techniques. Eventually, Cid and his other team mate reached the final fight. In that battle, the skills of weaponry and taijutsu clashed with the skills of genjutsus and taijutsu. Till the end, the battle was undecided, favoring Cid at some point. But, after the other young man activated his bloodline ability, Cid went all out using his ultimate techniques. In the clash which followed, the battle ended in a tie, with both of them becoming Chuunin. Happy and sad, the young squad made a celebration for the Rank up of two of their member, together with the rank up of their sensei, who just became an ANBU. From that point on, they were destined to each take their separated ways.

After he gained the Rank of Chuunin, Cid still continued to hang out with his friends form the squad, together with their sensei. Even so, they slowly started to distance and soon enough a gap appeared between them. The girl Yuki, who was the only one of them which failed the exam, she joined a new Genin squad. As for the other boy from the squad, he went on solo missions just as Cid did. Even when they were assigned to do squad missions with other Chuunin, Cid never ended up with his former squad friend. As for their sensei, he was so busy with his missions, that they never seemed to have time to spend together. So, the squad slowly started to fall apart. As for Cid, now he had to train on his own and develop new skills on his own. Well, since he was used to train only when his sensei was around, this was quite hard for Cid, who was in his twenties at that point. Whatever he tried to train for failed and he was stuck at the same level, with no further development. Eventually, he stopped trying and decided to focus on his missions, just so he could gain more knowledge and experience. He was still young, so there was time to advance. The first few missions which he got were all high ranking ones, from B to A Ranks. All of them were quite hard, since at this point all the tasks Cid had to do alone, without anyone to help him. Even though it was hard for him to do so, he knew that this was something that needed to be done. Soon, Cid realized that he was focused too much on working in a team, that he even forgot how to fight on his own.

One day, on one of those missions something happened, something that changed his life completely. It was a routine rescue mission, a team of 3 Chuunin was assigned to it, they had to beat the bad guard, find the client and get the hell out. Everything was going fine till the moment when they had to escape. During that moment they miss-calculated something and they ended up getting surrounded by the enemy. In order to escape they had to leave one person behind and Cid decided to be that one. He stayed all alone, fighting a lost battle, hoping that his friends will bring backup. But, no matter how much he waited, backup never came. Eventually Cid was stroke by a enemy attack and he felt into a river which dragged him all the way till Kumogakure no Sato. There, a old man rescued him and helped him get better. But, something was wrong, he had completely lost his memories. Well, some were still there. Either way, he was brought to the Raikage who then made him a Jounin of his village. As his partner, Cid was asgined with a man only know to him under the name Aegis. From that day, the two of them completed quite a bunch of tasks and missions, they were weapons of Kumogakure no Sato, the speedy Aegis and the giant Cid.

||Face Claim|


Series/Game: N/A
Name: This is a Naruto OC made by Shawnzy from Deviant. (Link Here)

RP example:
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Link - http://souldisruption.forumotion.com/t1076-the-search-mission-topic#8788




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PostSubject: Re: The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done]   The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done] EmptyTue Sep 13, 2011 7:11 pm

This is done. ^^

No, don't want a 6th Special Characteristic.

I got lazy with Appearance and the last part of the History.

If you need a Link to me RPing on a Naruto site I shall find an adequate one and post it up. But, to me it doesn't matter, Bleach or Naruto, pretty much the same.
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PostSubject: Re: The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done]   The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done] EmptyTue Sep 13, 2011 7:15 pm

If it's all right with you, could you place a snipet of one of your rps (Bleach or Naruto) in your application.
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PostSubject: Re: The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done]   The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done] EmptyTue Sep 13, 2011 8:02 pm

You can only have 2 Traits that are completely trained.

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PostSubject: Re: The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done]   The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done] EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 3:08 am

Snipet? Um, whats that? I added a Link to a topic in which I Rped and I posted a RP Example which is actually one of my posts from the topic to which I linked you.

I know that and I only have 1 Trait that is completely trained.
One - Inventor [Level Three]:
Two - Tank [Level Two]
Three - Blacksmith [Level One]

See, I added the level of mastery in the titles of the traits.

EDIT: I deleted the descriptions of the levels which my character doesn't have. Now it should make sense.

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PostSubject: Re: The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done]   The Iron Dragon of Kumogakure [Jounin Done] EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 12:29 pm

Snipet is portion, like you already had in your sample section. So youre fine there.

Gauntlets would actually be considered exotic yes, so you can just remove that little portion and leave it as exotic, and youll be fine.

Just edit that little tidbit there and youll be good, Ill approve it once thats done. (sorry, peeve of mind to approve something when theres extra info that isnt needed in lines and sections)
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