Hakai : Sannin of the Cloud village

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Hakai : Sannin of the Cloud village The_mask_by_theworldonfire-d45legn

|Basics|

Name: Hakai Lambo
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Lord of Lightning - Hakai was given this name not only because of his skill level as the Raikage. But also because of his mastery of the lightning element. He is truly skilled with it to the point hardly matched by others. Almost everyone of his attacks is lightning based or he uses his lightning to supplementary increase its power.

Hakai : Sannin of the Cloud village Storm_Stamp_by_soulshelter

Hakai : Sannin of the Cloud village Storm_Stamp_by_soulshelter

Physical Age: 28
Mentall Age: 28
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Village Hidden in the Clouds
Previous Residence: none
Clan: none

||Appearance|

General Appearance: Hakai is six foot, five inches and just under two hundred and twenty-five pounds. He is a a tall man, and rather built. He has a very tone skin and is completely covered chiseled in muscles. He is in no way buff, but has a strong slim build. He isn't rippling with massive muscles and doesn't have much bulk, like many others. But despite this he is well built, with broad shoulders and strong limbs. His body is perfectly textured as he is a work out maniac.He has big hands and big feet, that give him a good balance. His finger nails are left bare, and he thinks that only women should paint their names.

Hakai has dirty blonde hair with nartural dark streaks, almost the embodiment of a thunder storm. As the black streaks would represent the thunder clouds and blonde would be the lightning. Which covers the black clouds in its shimmering glory. His hair style is describe simply as wild, he has it tussled all around and allow it to hang down his back wildly. When Hakai awakes from his slumber he simply takes a shower and shakes his dead.

Then in a few moments his hair will dry and he has his style. It is a basic easy going style just like his personality. Hakai doesn't look much into his own personal appearance. Thus sometimes giving him a undefined look and rough look. He has piercing animal brown eyes, that are bright and can be seen clearly by all. They have a kind shine to them, giving people the feeling of welcome and kindness. Hakai's arms are covered in seals used to summon projectiles.

Hakai has tan white skin, from spending a lot of time in the sun, training. Hakai has his own unique and trendy (in his opinion) style of clothing. Though unlike most shinobi Hakai has different styles to his look. First being his casual Raikage look, what he wears around the village. With this style he wears a light tank top, so it will breath and he will be comfortable. Underneath that he has a mesh undergarment, for style. After that he has white wrist sleeves that are attacked to ninja armor underneath, as he is always prepared. But they look casual and were made for that purpose, so he doesn't look like he is wearing any armor. Also with this look at baggy pants, that are lose and comfortable. The Cloud Village's symbol is clear on his waist as he wears it like a belt buckle for all to see. This is intended for a little joke with his casual outfit.

Hakai second style is his at home or going out style. With this he simply wears as much clothes as possible, at home he is almost always naked. He finds it to be the most comfortable and the easiest way to seduce beautiful women who come to the door. If he has important company over or if he goes out he throws on a pair of silk Kumo underwear, with his name hand sewn onto the back. The underwear is one of his favorite statement pieces, as it has the Kumo symbol on the front and back. Finally for the style he puts on baggy pants, then with his always classic robe and hat with the cloud village symbol on it. Much like that of the kage's. But he wears it as a stylish piece no a uniform. Always leaving a shirt out of this look. As he doesn't like how they feel on his skin, so when he can he often sheds it. He tried not wearing pants, but quickly learn at a young age that isn't allowed.

His third style is his full battle uniform and he only takes it out when he needs it. The battle uniform starts with a standard breathable black tank top for a shirt. Most of his shoulders and upper arms are left bare. From his elbow to his knuckles is a metal ninja armor gauntlet. The gauntlets have a black bandages underneath them that wraps his arms and legs with, allowing for great movement. The next piece of his battle armor is his chest armor. It is metal as well and is custom made to fit his body perfectly almost like an outer layer of skin. The chest plate covers both the from and back, with metal covers on the top of his shoulders. On the back of the ninja armor chest plate is the Village Hidden in the Cloud's symbol.

Hakai in uniform bandages his legs as well. He also covers his shins and keens with metal plate like piece. The clothing part of his battle uniform is simple, he has baggy like shorts, with a Cloud village symbol over the groin, as small blue and white tapestries come behind it. Finally Hakai has a white anbu mask with a single drawn lightning strike over the right side and eye. This is what completes his battle uniform. It is also the under garments of his fourth style of clothing.

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YOUNGER HAKAI -TO PRESENT WITH BATTLE UNIFORM

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||Rank Information|

Letter Rank: S
Ninja Rank: Sanin

||Personality|

Overall Personality:

Hakai is laid back and carefree for the most part. He always has a jovial behavior even in fights or battles. He is also very charismatic and is not avert to praising other, including enemies or other people not from his village. He believe any extraordinary jutsu or ability deserves praise and honor. He is a kind man and believes the best in people. He even gets excited if an opponents has great skill or does a powerful attack. But for the most part Hakai just trains in the mountains, goes surfing for hot women, plays cards and relaxes. He doesn't care for work; but does it as needed. He is a carefree elite shinobi, and is best described as a human. He is not perfect and never tries to call himself such.

But despite these positive behaviors Hakai has a serious side. He has strong concern for the people of his village, despite being extremely lazy. He hates the thought of having to battle his fellow Cloud ninja. Anyone who endangers his village and the people of it, will be his enemies. This mainly because he still has loyalty to his home village. He remembers enemies for life if you get on his bad side, there is no chance of getting off of it. He dislikes people who are always series, or are over cocky in their power. He believe that you should never brag, but let your abilities and skills speak for themselves.

On top of his serious side, Hakai is a completely different person in battle. He can be describe as a relentless demon, ruthless and cunning in his battle strategies. Which is why he was given the title and rank of Raikage. In war young teens and experienced adults are blurred to him. It is all based on the headband and the side they fight on. He will slay an enemy without a second thought or a single thought of mercy. Because of his war experience and his ability to be a perfect shinobi. Which is why outside of battle he takes such a relaxed approach to life. For Hakai knows all to well that the ninja world cannot have peace forever. He is always read to step up when the time is right.

His personality is much like a young child, kind and gives people the benefit of the doubt. First Corinthians chapter thirteen, versus eleven best describes Hakai's unique personality. "When I was a child, I talked like a child, I thought like a child, I reasoned like a child. When I became a man, I put the ways of childhood behind me." As for the most part his has a young, kind and lazy personality but when the time comes he puts away childish things and show the people of the ninja world why he is called, Raikage.

Hakai has a generally kind personality to all people. He normally gives them the benefit of the doubt when first meeting them. To him it doesn't matter if the person is a rouge ninja, an enemy ninja or new ninja in his own village. He doesn't assume things about people based on rumors or allegations against them. He believes everyone has a story and because of that they should be able to tell it. As their side of what happened might be completely different from a rumor or story of them. Which is why Hakai generally is just a kind person to any and all who need assistance he will give it to them if they ask.

Even though Hakai is a kind person, he is still a picky person. If that be deciding who are his friends. What he eats or what he will wear for the day. He likes things to be a certain way and won't tolerate them if they aren't. He has a few pet peeves that can easily set Hakai off if pushed to hard. For starters he likes all his red meat cooked Medium Rare, he can't stand over cooked meat. Though it seems highly childish to Hakai it is important. He also requires people to eat properly, not like rampaging lions on a zebra carcass. So if eating with him, make sure you have his food cooked correctly and you have proper dinner manors.

Other pet peeves that Hakai has are, when people don't have good personal hygiene. He hates people who sink of their own body odor. Or if a person is just generally dirty, Hakai is very annoyed by it. He is a true believe of at least one shower a day. Anything less and you went to bed covered in your own filth. Another annoyance Hakai has is arrogance. When someone brags about their skills openly to everyone. Or if they attempt to fish for complements. Now Hakai is the first person to give people compliments when they are appropriate and just. Which is why is annoyed by people who only compliment themselves and never take the time to look at the awesomeness of other people.

Now like all people Hakai is a person, he has clear character flaws. He is annoyed but a few silly childish things, that most people could just ignore. But despite these petty pet peeves he has, he is still a kind and good hearted person. That only enters battle when absolutely forced to or when appropriate. He enjoys joking and laughing with any person no matter their story or background. When you meet Hakai you are always on a clean slate. He lets everyone prove themselves to him and he basis his opinion on them through his experiences with them. Overall Hakai is just a good guy who wants the best for the ninja world and strives for peace in all that he does.

Hakai is also a man, he loves and has been loved. He once fell in love with a beautiful women and never forgot that experience. Despite fate ripping his love from his arms he always remembered her and what she was. He loves, the thought of love and often encourages people to take a chance on love. He even attempts to be a match maker. He is just a big guy who is a huge softy for romantic stories and love.

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Fears:

That he won't be able to protect the Village Hidden in the Cloud
That he won't accomplish his goals.
That members of his village might be harmed
That the ninja world might never find peace
Kidney Stones - he has never had them and he hopes he never will.
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Goals:
To get revenge on the man who he blames for his love's death
To allow Kumoagkure to conqueror the ninja world, and show its dominance.
To protect every Cloud ninja with his life
To align the Cloud and Mist village in a powerful ninja alliance.
To have a big family with lots of children.

||Skill Information|

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||History|

Family: Mother: Sarin Rikan and Father: Zabuza lambo
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Posts : 25 Join date : 2011-08-28

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Posts : 25 Join date : 2011-08-28

done... FIRST ONE DONE ON THE SITE.

*THROWS CONFETTI IN THE AIR*

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I lied I wish to fix something.. tomorrow when I get home from school.

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S-Rank Criminal Posts : 140 Join date : 2011-04-02

A). You require TheBlindRedKings permission for this rank.
B). You must have Fuuinjutsu to use seals in the extent and amount your appearance is talking about.
C).

Quote :: Open to the public: Only Hakai can use this.

This should be a No. Not only He can use this, but just a simple no.
D).

Quote :: Type: Physical, chakra, mental or misc?

Fix this so that it follows the template. It is one of those, not all of them (and those are the examples of what the section should be considered when making a custom SC).
E). Your custom SC, Lightning Lord, should be considered as overpowered. It basically gives your character Lightning Armor at no chakra cost, can absorb other lightning jutsu that are of a lower rank, and increase vibration so that it can cut through most things based on your description (its way too vague). Therefore remove it.

Posts : 25 Join date : 2011-08-28

A. I know but he said he is busy now.

B. Removed

C. changed

D. Added, I don't know how I forgot that. XD

E. I changed it and added more description. I also removed parts of the applications. But I say a Admin have a very similar ability just with water. So that is where I only used staff applications to help make my own.

S-Rank Criminal Posts : 342 Join date : 2011-05-19

Quote :: Name: Brotherhood
Rank: A
Requirements: Summoning Contract and be able to have a boss summon
Type: chakra
Description: This is a special connection made between the summon contract holder and the summonings. It can only be attended through years of battling along side each other. You learn your partners every move and style. You are able to predict what they are going to do before they do it. You know your summoning like you know yourself, they become more than just controlled servants or animals. They are your brothers in arms and because of that together your power increase. When fighting along side one's summon both are increased by 70% in overall power. The summoning and you are one, together you make a unstoppable tag team feared through the ninja world.
Open to the public: No

Name: Lightning Lord
Rank: A
Requirements: Lightning as main element
Type: Chakra
Description: A title of Hakai's skill with lightning element. Only the most elite user may wield the name of Lightning Lord. Hakai skill with lightning element is legendary, allow him to wield the powerful and destructive element in his hands. He is able to send it through any object he touches, increasing its vibrations and giving it amazing cutting power. He is able to cast lightning over his own body to increase his nerves to allow him to have unmatched reflexes. His usage in Lightning skills is almost beyond comprehension to a normal shinobi. Hakai's lightning techniques are 70% more powerful and destructive. Allowing for much stronger lightning charges through ordinary items, them most shinobi. He can even course lightning through non fighting items, such as a rock, pencil or even stick.
Open to the public: No

Personally Alright I see where this may be an issue though if you take a look at this...

Quote :: Clearly we don’t 20 people making the same basic SC for example speed orientated SC and just rewording it and claiming to be there own, there are already speed based things so just “ Improving” them won’t be allowed.

So as for the summon ya no I'm calling that you have to remove that since it pretty much my own with some "rewording"

As for the lightning bender ability ya you made it Far more powerfully then my ability where my water jutsu are amplified on the same level as The max Rank elemental SC * difference is that since i Don't use my other elements much I took out the bonus on them and added them to my Dominate* but here...

Quote :: Hakai skill with lightning element is legendary, allow him to wield the powerful and destructive element in his hands. He is able to send it through any object he touches, increasing its vibrations and giving it amazing cutting power. He is able to cast lightning over his own body to increase his nerves to allow him to have unmatched reflexes. His usage in Lightning skills is almost beyond comprehension to a normal shinobi. Hakai's lightning techniques are 70% more powerful and destructive. Allowing for much stronger lightning charges through ordinary items, them most shinobi. He can even course lightning through non fighting items, such as a rock, pencil or even stick.

Which Cana is right about, this is purely a lightning armor limited tech that has the same effects, but limitless duration and less then no draw back, that cannot be offered for free and trying that truly makes me not feel uneasy to as why you even tried to

as opposed to...

Quote :: Being classified as a prodigy during their early years, the ninja has now mastered the water element and attains great power from their continuous training. The ninja's water techniques are now 70% more destructive by the increase in pressure in size. The user can now summon large volumes of water from molding their chakra, which can be used for their water techniques or other convenient uses. They can also scale across water in very high speeds and attack from the depth.

Is there an indication where were i can use the water in my own water in my body and automatically get the hydration tec were physical attacks wouldn't have an effect on me or a Can freely increase my physical stats though bulkier, leaner muscles for speed or strength? No, purely chakra based that still requires everything else in naruto which is of chakra usage

And why might you ask I get some of my own custom SC like these that may make him stand out from the rest of the users? well asking yourself what is my job as a special missing. nin. To become a driving force that helps cause conflict in the world that creates a reason why rpger become stronger, creates drama, a common threat, a mortal enemy that people can freely attack and have no real repercussion aside from saving the world or at least the world important to people. Such Antagonist are meant somewhat stronger in a basic since to actually make it a challenge worth for the strongest. Other wise the threat isn't there and your left with nothing.

So I do expect both Sc to be taken out before your approved or allowed to rpg with this character

Posts : 25 Join date : 2011-08-28

For starters my summon SC is completely different from your. I absolutely made it my own, as your clearly states that you have complete control over you summon. While mine is based on the mutual bond and companionship between the partnership. You said it again and again "They can not disobey you." While mine would be like the 3rd Hokage and Enma, they can disobey you. But they never would because you have forged a brotherhood through battles with each other. Which is absolutely different than yours and show that I made it my own.

As for the element, I plan to use Lightning Release as my main fighting style. But I can see how one could construe that as a way to get around it. I didn't intended to do that at all. I just put that in show he has skills to obtain the jutsu. The SC does not give me LRA, that is my fault on a poor description. I added that in that it isn't giving me lightning release armor.

S-Rank Criminal Posts : 475 Join date : 2011-01-28

If you're ninjutsu recessive you need to reduce the damage percentage increase as well as remove the reflex increase.

The summoning is fine.

Posts : 25 Join date : 2011-08-28

I decreased it and I only put it that high to begin with because Aki's was that high. So I thought that it was a rule or something, as he has medical as a dominate. So I don't get why I would have to lower it when other were approved with it higher. But I did, just so I can get approved.

D-Rank Criminal Posts : 807 Join date : 2011-01-28

Quote :: Name: Godlike Strength
Rank: S
Type: Physical
Description: Just because the title says does not mean it is true. The user is the strongest of them all! Must have a training topic of 4000 words and must have Taijutsu as a Dominate specialty. This technique is rare and takes a lot of training. The user can break through walls and break bones with ease. Needs Super Strength and Stronger than the average ninja strength. Must be approved from two admin. 50% physically stronger then the average nin of the same rank

Name: Godlike Speed
Rank: S
Type: Physical
Description: The user must make an extra long training post for this speed. Must have a training topic of 4000 words. Must have Taijutsu or Weaponry as a Dominate specialty. The user is unseen by anyone and moves in the blink of an eye, 35% faster then ninja of their rank. This technique is rare and takes lots of training. Needs Super Speed. Must also have permission from 2 Admin.

^Sorry bro, can't have these.

Quote :: Name: Brotherhood
Rank: A
Requirements: Summoning Contract and be able to have a boss summon
Type: chakra
Description: This is a special connection made between the summon contract holder and the summonings. It can only be attended through years of battling along side each other. You learn your partners every move and style. You are able to predict what they are going to do before they do it. You know your summoning like you know yourself, they become more than just controlled servants or animals. They are your brothers in arms and because of that together your power increase. When fighting along side one's summon both are increased by 70% in overall power. The summoning and you are one, together you make a unstoppable tag team feared through the ninja world.
Open to the public: No

Logically explain how team work increases actual physical characteristics.

Quote :: Name: Lightning Lord
Rank: A
Requirements: Lightning as main element
Type: Chakra
Description: A title of Hakai's skill with lightning element. Only the most elite user may wield the name of Lightning Lord. Hakai skill with lightning element is legendary, allow him to wield the powerful and destructive element in his hands. 1)He is able to send it through any object he touches, 2)increasing its vibrations and giving it amazing cutting power. He is able to cast lightning over his own body to increase his nerves to allow him to have unmatched reflexes. *This gives him the skill, he still must have Lightning Release armor and use it as a jutsu* 3)His usage in Lightning skills is almost beyond comprehension to a normal shinobi. Hakai's lightning techniques are 50% more powerful and destructive. Allowing for much stronger lightning charges through ordinary items, them most shinobi. He can even course lightning through non fighting items, such as a rock, pencil or even stick.
Open to the public: No

1) Nope, this isn't possible by any means.
2) This needs more definitions.
3) Dominant ninjutsu only.

Posts : 25 Join date : 2011-08-28

1.) Why can't I have those, I have multiple people who are S rank approved with them who have less on their app then me. So I don't see how I won't be allowed to have them yet you have allowed plenty of others. I have exceptional rping skills and always have high detail in my post. As such I don't see why I would be the only S rank not allowed.

2.) I don't understand how I am suppose to explain it. As many other people have the exact same thing, but power is increased through combat skill. Its a similar thing to summoner and if you like I can link you to approve one similar to mine. That do not require that explanation have the exact same boost.

3.) That is cannon.. killer bee flowed in lightning chakra in anything he touched, including a pencil. Which I used as a n example. Ok if I must have ninjutsu to use it then why have other people been approved which similar things. And one that are even stronger than mine.

Honestly I think there is some serious baby back bull shit. Where you guys are saying one thing one app because they are your friends or are staff. But you except me to jump through hoops and change everything you allow in other apps. Which doesn't make any sense and if you except members to follow standards, then your own staff's applications should be at that standard. As I modeled my own with long appearance, personality and Special characteristics after YOUR STAFFS. Who are doing the vary thing you are telling me to change and we have similar dominates and recessives. Honestly I understand that this is going to piss you off. But honestly its just annoying that you guys are staff and doing it. That you have a double standard to yourself. Honestly when I first say some of you staff applications, my first thought was.. "What the heck, thats allowed.. ok" So I found apps that had similar or exact styles and modeled myself in their apps image. With my own unique twists and levels that fit my character. But I mean I will change it but it would only be fair if you required them to change it as well.

D-Rank Criminal Posts : 807 Join date : 2011-01-28

The app is denied as of now, because the member is resorting to insults because we're trying to moderate his app.

We'll resume moderation on a later date when you're calm.

S-Rank Criminal Posts : 140 Join date : 2011-04-02

And before you comment. This is a group decision by the majority of the staff team.

We have tried to explain to you why it cant be allowed,etc, and you refuse to cooperate, so like Shin said, we will wait until you stop with the insults, since that is a violation of the rules. You may consider this your first warning for that violation. If you intend to keep this attitude up, the app will be locked and moved to archives at our discretion, and without notification. Again, please refer to your avatar and read the rules threads, since it seems to have not been done.

Posts : 25 Join date : 2011-08-28

I am not insulting anyone. I am trying to point out that you have a double standard. You have staff that are doing everything you are telling me I am wrong. I am sorry if that upsets you for pointing out a double standard. I am really trying not to insult you and I can see my sarcasm can do that. But I mean you are staff, your apps should be the ones to look up to. So I did and now you guys are telling me I am doing things against the rules. When your own admins are doing the things you are telling me are wrong. I was just trying to point it out. Now get you angry, but its true.

Edit: Also what are you talking about? I have made ever change and edit ask of me even when there was a double standard before. I simply did it and moved on but I finally got sick and tired of it for the reasons I said.

D-Rank Criminal Posts : 807 Join date : 2011-01-28

You're assuming all of that.

Maybe I was going to apologize for something I wrote or fix the other app in question, but when you raged on me, I feel no need to apologize to someone who jumps to conclusions.

Pushing this issue is only making it worse on yourself.

S-Rank Criminal Posts : 140 Join date : 2011-04-02

Quote :: Name: Lightning Lord
Rank: A
Requirements: Lightning as main element
Type: Chakra
Description: A title of Hakai's skill with lightning element. Only the most elite user may wield the name of Lightning Lord. Hakai skill with lightning element is legendary, allow him to wield the powerful and destructive element in his hands. He is able to send it through any object he touches, increasing its vibrations and giving it amazing cutting power. He is able to cast lightning over his own body to increase his nerves to allow him to have unmatched reflexes. *This gives him the skill, he still must have Lightning Release armor and use it as a jutsu* His usage in Lightning skills is almost beyond comprehension to a normal shinobi. Hakai's lightning techniques are 50% more powerful and destructive. Allowing for much stronger lightning charges through ordinary items, them most shinobi. He can even course lightning through non fighting items, such as a rock, pencil or even stick.
Open to the public: No

Quote :: Name: Deity of the sea
Rank: A
Type: Chakra Based
Requirement: Only Aki can use this
Description: The title given to those elite ninja who've become legendary for their power and skill over the water element. Being classified as a prodigy during their early years, the ninja has now mastered the water element and attains great power from their continuous training. The ninja's water techniques are now 70% more destructive by the increase in pressure in size. The user can now summon large volumes of water from molding their chakra, which can be used for their water techniques or other convenient uses. They can also scale across water in very high speeds and attack from the depths

Ok, lets go off of this then, since you want an explanation.

To start off with yours: Sending lightning through any object touched. This includes, rocks, water, trees, rubber, lava, metal, humans, animals, etc. You have no specified how much you can send into a person, only that you can, so by merely touching someone, you can essentially kill them. That is why it needs to be removed.

While you are correct in the vibrations, lightning does not give cutting power. It gives piercing power, meaning like a stab, not so much a slash. Given that you specified cutting, it is assumed that you mean both piercing and slashing powers are amplified, for again, any object. By association you can essentially turn anything into something that can go straight through a target, no questions asked, for no chakra cost because it is a SC, not a jutsu. Again, that is overpowered.

Your reflex statement still contradicts itself. You get the ability for the reflexes as a skill, but you still must obtain lightning armor? If you have the skill, then why would you need something else to use it? That is why it needs to be removed completely. Not just a little tidbit thrown in, but taken out. You cannot have the skill, unless you have the Lightning Armor. That’s simple.

Now. On to Akis: Yes, he gains 20% more damage. But that’s about it. He can summon large volumes of water. Swim through water and move upon it quickly. And attack from underwater. Those are the only bonuses he gets. So based on that, yours is much more powerful than his is based on your descriptions. And ONLY your descriptions. So saying they are the same thing is unwarranted, since, again, the bonuses granted by his are much less than the bonuses granted by yours.

Quote :: 1.) Why can't I have those, I have multiple people who are S rank approved with them who have less on their app then me. So I don't see how I won't be allowed to have them yet you have allowed plenty of others. I have exceptional rping skills and always have high detail in my post. As such I don't see why I would be the only S rank not allowed.

2.) I don't understand how I am suppose to explain it. As many other people have the exact same thing, but power is increased through combat skill. Its a similar thing to summoner and if you like I can link you to approve one similar to mine. That do not require that explanation have the exact same boost.

1). It is an Admin decision. That is not to say you cannot train for them later, but you cannot start with them on your application. You also need to keep in mind your rank depends on TheBlindRedKings verdict on whether he says you can have S-Rank or not. Not the moderators, since he is the Raikage, he has final say. And what he says goes, so also keep in mind that you may be required to modify your entire application to A-Rank standards if he does say no.

2). As for the summoner characteristic, you pretty much copied Aki’s there. The wording is slightly different, but the entire basis is his special characteristic. Therefore if he wants it removed from your application, he has the right to state that and it must be followed. Had you posted it first, then he would have to remove it. However, you have already stated that yours is based off of that one, and are in fact “similar, with the exact same bonuses” making this a plagiarism and copyright issue.

Had you asked for permission to use it, then there would be less of a problem, but since you haven’t, it’s now a big problem.

You may think we are being unfair, but we moderate everyones application the same, staff or not. You may think you are getting shafted, but keep in mind what I have said above. And please keep in mind the copyright issues. You cannot take an idea you like, reword it slightly, ad expect it to fly, especially if it is from one of the staff members. In that aspect, yes, we are being biased. But that is because the characteristic was already approved, and you have, again a “similar with the exact same bonuses”. Also, please remember we do reserve the right to deny without explanation, so be glad Im taking the time to do this.

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I'm not going to allow S.L.J to become Sannin in my village based on: the performance of this application [it speaks for itself], the trolling done through the application process and the arrogance of S.L.J's comments.

He's denied being a Sannin in my village, perhaps a Genin [if we're taking the best parts of this and even then it would be 'iffy'], but otherwise I'd allow him to be an Academy Student.

If you honestly think there is a 'double standard', I'd ask you to look at what you've done on the site other than this 'thing'. You've established not only in this topic ,but in others your motives and that you yourself have a 'double standard'. This isn't a place to argue, and as you have stated before in the chatbox, "Listen to the mods and shut the hell up."

I now find it interesting that now you're trying to argue against the moderators that you praised only a few weeks ago. Please, re-think your actions and statements.

Again, re-exam what you have posted and think it through with common sense. If you show signs of promise I'd be ok with you having a lower rank Chuunin to begin with, otherwise stop this.

S-Rank Criminal Posts : 475 Join date : 2011-01-28

Baring all other issues with the application, TBLK has given his verdict on the rank, therefore you may adjust your rank to Genin/Chuunin of Kumo or you may attempt to apply for another village/group, the choice is yours.

Kumo Chunin Posts : 187 Join date : 2011-02-01

Archived due to lack of progress for well over a week.