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Sirena Shimizu


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PostSubject: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptySun Aug 28, 2011 5:54 pm

"Kumogakure" Shinobi

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|Basics|



Name: Kaira Rose
Nickname/Aliases: Black Rose
Age: 20
Physical Age: 20
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Kumo
Previous Residence: Kumo
Clan: None

||Appearance|



General Appearance:
Kaira starting from the very top they would notice the mass of silky smooth red hair that she usually would have tied into a pony tail, though when this is untied the hair would easily reach down to just above her rear. Her hair would also seem to form several natural bangs that hang over each side of her face past her eyes to give her a rather alluring look.

Kairas eyes are a soft blue in colour almost light enough to be white one would notice if they looked deep enough into her eyes themselves they would find soft specks of purple throughout the white orbs that seem to draw everyone and everything in.
Her nose is of average size and shape and holds nothing truly special about it, other then it leads down to the soft pink lips that always seem to carry a soft pout to them. Her lips are of normal size and seem to fit the femine face she has perfectly.
Moving further down one would come to the large chest she posses’, this is often the first place people tend to look and remember about Kaira as it is one of her most distinguishing features. Though many question whether or not her E cup breasts are fake or not, though she assures everyone they are. Her stomach is flat and rather firm to the touch and if she tenses her muscles enough one could make out slight muscle definition beneath the flawless skin.

If one is to look at Kaira from behind without a top on or if she is in a bikini they would see a very large tattoo of a phoenix with its wings spread in flame, this tattoo seems to take up the whole of her back and looks very lifelike one would swear the eyes of the phoenix follow them, she is often reserved in telling people the true meaning of the tattoo.

Her arms are the perfect length for her body, the tips of her fingers just reaching slightly below her crotch, one would notice that on the entire left arm she has a tattoo of a winding vine that starts on her hand and finishes on the top of her shoulder, along this vine thirty four blossomed flowers rest. On her right bicep there is a tattoo of a circle split into five sectors, each representing one of the main element affinities and in the middle a yin and yang symbol to show her affinity for medical jutsu, on her right forearm is the tattoo of a dragon with its head starting on the top of her hand the tail reaching to her elbow itself. Her fingernails are often shaped to have sharp points and are often painted a dark red colour.

Kairas rear would be firm with no to little signs of fat on it itself due to the amount of excercise she does, this is also one of the only areas on her body she has not yet tattooed as well as her crotch, neck, face or some of her legs.

Her legs are also in her opinion the best feature of her body, They are long, toned and curved in a way that completely compliments the rest of her body, they are also always void of and body hair itself and on her right inner thigh there would rest a tattoo of a black rose to symbolize her dark, violent yet caring nature. Her feet are rather small though not freakishly small and her nails always seem to be painted a different colour every week but her favourite colour is a deep dark red.

Kairas skin is always lightly tanned and her body seems to have no signs of tan lines at all, the skin itself is flawless other then the tattoos and is void of most body air aside from that on her had and her eye brows.

    Height: 1.5 metres
    Weight: 55kg
    Eye Color: Purple
    Hair Color & Style: red

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||Rank Information|


Letter Rank: A
Ninja Rank: Jonin


||Personality|


Overall Personality:

Kaira was born into a family in the middle class. She was taught how to respect those who are older than her and to only fight when necessary. Kaira is not the type of person who starts arguments, but she is quite capable of ending one with just a few words. A flaw of hers would be that she jumps to conclusions. But most of the time, she normally keeps to herself and helps those who are in need. Kaira is very much like her mother in behavior, she is stubborn, independent and is very strong hearted and willed. Kaira will not allow anyone to walk over her or tell her what to do. Kaira doesn't like Arrogant people. Kaira like's waterfalls. Kaira is handle's a good situation really well and isn't afraid easily



When Kaira is out in the public, she is observant and will make time to help those who are in need around her. She likes to spend time with the elderly as the stories that they come up with are always interesting. Kaira is afraid of growing old as she is quite self conscious; her appearance must always be at it's best. Kaira is the type of person who loves the attention, but she does not seek it. There is also a dark side to her as well, Kaira was brought up without friends except for her family. She is the only child and does become bitter when she is lonely, this is the reason why she loves the attention as she never got any when she was younger. Kaira was an orphan she lost her parents when she was 4 Years old. After that time she became very sad and silent. She dislike's Alcohol very much. She dislike's Smoking in general. Kaira likes Animals, espacially Cats and Snakes.
    Favorite Quote/Saying: Lets play
    Hobby: cooking
    Favorite Color: Red
    Fears: Fire
    Goals: Become Kage


||Skill Information|



Elemental Affinity:
    Dominant: Water
    Recessive: Lightning



Skill Specialty
    Dominant: Medical
    Recessive: Ninjutsu


Special Characteristics:
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Traits:
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||History|



Family: None
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyMon Sep 12, 2011 9:06 pm

everything done clan needs approving thats it and SC and traits
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyMon Sep 12, 2011 10:27 pm

Please use the correct template
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 9:47 pm

done
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 9:52 pm


  • Need to put Kumogakure at the very top
  • Ninja Rank: Jinchuriki/genin - Demons are not posted yet so you cannot be a Jinchuriki yet
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 10:22 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 10:24 pm

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Name: Basic Chakra control
Rank: D-C
Type: Chakra
Requirements:: Requires Med or ninjutsu specialty and no increase Chakra SC
Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra you put out but being a beginner, you have basic knowledge on the matter at hand. with naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, E rank cost off of C rank jutsu and below

Name: Advence Chakra control
Rank: B
Type: Chakra
Requirements:: Requires Med specialty and no increase Chakra SC And basic chakra control
Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra you put out now being a session pro in this art,You have understanding about the amount of chakra you place into your techniques. Techniques that require little to almost no focus,. The lower the technique, the better you save on chakra.. with naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, C rank cost off of A rank jutsu and below

Name: Master Chakra control
Rank:A
Type: Chakra
Requirements:: Requires Med specialty Dominate and no increase Chakra SC And Advence chakra control
Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra now you truly are a master, ou have a complete understanding on chakra, able to perform techniques with little to no fatigue. The lower the technique the more control you have over it. With naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, B rank cost off of S rank jutsu and below

These three count as one.
Pick a level then delete the other two.
Basic is level 1, Advance level 2, and Master level 3.


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3. Herb King. A master among the masters. The herb king trait is one that you taken, achieving skills that makes you quite a legend. This character (You) have full knowledge of what poisons can quickly kill or cause an excuritating death. You know which herbs for the correct salves in order to fix a deadly poison, your knowledge of where there are S-Rank poisons and salves and below


3. The Horticulturist: The mastery of understanding what plants are necessary for the soil to become more fertile, what is the best plant for the climate, which plants can be edible if a person is stuck in the wilderness, what herbs can be sold to herbalist or the markest. You are a master among the masters of horticulture and you can teach other gardners as wel.

2. The Undeterred: You have practiced so much you have developed a routine. This routine allows you to adapt with your muscles, so you're less fatigue than with most. Your chakra is starting to become balance and because of that, you have 25% less word req when training jutsu

You may only have one level 3 and two level 2s.



  • Personality - Both Paragraphs need to be 150+ words.


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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 10:39 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyWed Sep 14, 2011 10:43 pm

All checks out fine with me.

Need Approval from Kage for Jounin Rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 2:31 pm

I honestly hate to judge your effort, but I need to see a better rp sample for this rank. I will give you a period of 48 hours to re-do it if you're willing, if not I would be more than happy with you being a Chuunin.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:07 pm

Still would like for you to remain as Chuunin. Thanks. Cleared for Chuunin.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:08 pm

Due to the verdict, you will have to edit your application to Chunin standards.
When you are finished, please bump the topic.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:10 pm

why what wrong with it now it always the lesser positions not even a reason why

its just as good as other jonins
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:26 pm

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why what wrong with it now it always the lesser positions not even a reason why

its just as good as other jonins

You want reasons? Ok, that's understandable.

Here:

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18 casually browsed around the shops she had decided to visit for the day. She needed to let Krillin have the house today so that it could be cleaned. There was a whole bunch of crap in there that they didn't use anymore or was just simply too old and useless. Unfortunately they couldn't include Roshi in that list so he was off too; most likely getting into trouble somewhere. She picked out a shirt and held it over her torso to see how it would look. Deciding against it she put it back on the rack and kept looking. She didn't need too much, just a few outfits to replace the ones that were either too out of style or too worn out to wear anymore. She didn't have that many to begin with since she was usually tight for money. Because of this she had to be picky about the clothes she wore since she had to rotate through them quite often. She didn't want to look like someone who was completely out of touch with today's style but she still had to be careful not to spend too much. It was sort of tricky but having had to do this for a few years, she had gotten used to it. It took a bit more searching but she finally found something that suited her tastes. Once everything was paid for she left the store and walked to a secluded spot before taking off into the sky and heading for home. Krillin better have everything cleared out by the time she got back.

Once she was airborne it didn't take her too long to reach the water. Flying over the ocean she soon caught sight of the island where she spent most of her days. The first thing she noticed was the pile of boxes stacked up on the beach. She had thought he was going to get it all off the island by the time she got back but it didn't matter all that much. So long as all the crap was outside and the house was still spotless then that was all that mattered. Upon landing on the island she was quite surprised to see Krillin just lying on the ground. Not only was he not conscious but all his hair was gone. Now something was definitely up, Krillin knew full well that she didn't like him bald, not to mention she highly doubted that he would just take a nap out on the beach like this. She dropped her shopping bags off to the side and knelt down to get a closer look at him. She quickly noticed he had bruises all over him; it looked like he had gotten into a fight. Who the hell would come all the way out here to beat up her husband? She had made a few enemies over the course of her life but none of them knew anything about her family or where she lived. Considering that she was extremely difficult to follow she had never worried that anyone would find this place. But someone obviously had, and had decided it would be a good idea to shave his head no less. Her scanners detected that his vitals were stable so he wasn't in any danger, in fact he would likely wake up soon. Once he did she would find out who did this and go have her vengeance.

Picking him up, she opened the door and carried the short man inside, laying him down on the couch. While waiting for him to wake up she went into the kitchen to grab a towel and she soaked it in water before carrying it over to him. She threw it on his forehead to prevent any kind of fever from rising, but mainly so he could use it to wipe his head clean. She had noticed the jar of wax on her way in and could tell from the gleam of his bald scalp that whoever had shaved him had also decided to apply some to his head. While there was nothing to do about it now there was no way he was keeping it like that, he was going to grow it back just like he had when they had first gotten married. Taking a seat in the chair near the couch she folded her arms and waited for him to wake up before she started questioning him. "So it looks like you got beaten up by someone. Do you know who it was?" This was the first thing she needed to know, whether this was something she had brought on him or just a random act of violence that happened to pass by the island. She wasn't too worried about his recovery; the blonde woman knew he'd be just fine. He had been through much worse and come out of it in no time so something like this didn't worry her. She was confident that soon this would just be an unpleasant memory and they would go back to their usual lives as soon as his hair was back.

The writing style isn't as bad as we've seen, but it's not high enough quality for me to become a Jounin. Quality is the key; The length is small, and it leads to a common situation [not saying that all RP samples have to be intense, but if there common situation it needs to be more in depth on details].

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she grew older Kaira found herself at the gates of Konoha, entering with the escrot of Anbu and other nin, she had met with the hokage and joined the village in a hope to correct some of the damage she has done. She now resides there permanently as a resident doctor in the hospital and also now has begun to lead her own squad.

Escort of ANBU? Ok, lets be sure about this reference to the Black Ops. program: Who do they protect? Do they escort anyone in the open? Why would they be at the gates?

That along with several other poor references and with the size of the history leads us to believe you'd be better suited as a Chuunin.

I can continue with the reasons if you wish.


Also, Jounin is full.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:35 pm

now it is just magically full typical
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:38 pm

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now it is just magically full typical

Do you mind explaining what your complaint is? Because I don't see what's wrong with being a Chuunin.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:40 pm

never mind ill just accept the chunin postion and changed the app acording to the rank
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 8:41 pm

Understandable, thanks for joining Kumogakure. jiraiya
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 9:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 10:23 pm


  • You never edited your letter rank to B or your ninja rank to Chunin
  • Only B rank and below special characteristics
  • Traits - You may have one level 2 and one level 1
  • Personality still needs 150+ words for both paragraphs
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PostSubject: Re: Kaira Rose    Kaira Rose   EmptyWed Oct 05, 2011 7:09 am

Archived due to lack of progress for well over a week.
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