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Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Kaira Rose Sun Aug 28, 2011 5:54 pm | |
| "Kumogakure" Shinobi |Basics| Name: Kaira Rose Nickname/Aliases: Black Rose Age: 20 Physical Age: 20 Gender: Female Birthplace: Kumo Previous Residence: Kumo Clan: None ||Appearance| General Appearance:Kaira starting from the very top they would notice the mass of silky smooth red hair that she usually would have tied into a pony tail, though when this is untied the hair would easily reach down to just above her rear. Her hair would also seem to form several natural bangs that hang over each side of her face past her eyes to give her a rather alluring look. Kairas eyes are a soft blue in colour almost light enough to be white one would notice if they looked deep enough into her eyes themselves they would find soft specks of purple throughout the white orbs that seem to draw everyone and everything in. Her nose is of average size and shape and holds nothing truly special about it, other then it leads down to the soft pink lips that always seem to carry a soft pout to them. Her lips are of normal size and seem to fit the femine face she has perfectly. Moving further down one would come to the large chest she posses’, this is often the first place people tend to look and remember about Kaira as it is one of her most distinguishing features. Though many question whether or not her E cup breasts are fake or not, though she assures everyone they are. Her stomach is flat and rather firm to the touch and if she tenses her muscles enough one could make out slight muscle definition beneath the flawless skin. If one is to look at Kaira from behind without a top on or if she is in a bikini they would see a very large tattoo of a phoenix with its wings spread in flame, this tattoo seems to take up the whole of her back and looks very lifelike one would swear the eyes of the phoenix follow them, she is often reserved in telling people the true meaning of the tattoo. Her arms are the perfect length for her body, the tips of her fingers just reaching slightly below her crotch, one would notice that on the entire left arm she has a tattoo of a winding vine that starts on her hand and finishes on the top of her shoulder, along this vine thirty four blossomed flowers rest. On her right bicep there is a tattoo of a circle split into five sectors, each representing one of the main element affinities and in the middle a yin and yang symbol to show her affinity for medical jutsu, on her right forearm is the tattoo of a dragon with its head starting on the top of her hand the tail reaching to her elbow itself. Her fingernails are often shaped to have sharp points and are often painted a dark red colour. Kairas rear would be firm with no to little signs of fat on it itself due to the amount of excercise she does, this is also one of the only areas on her body she has not yet tattooed as well as her crotch, neck, face or some of her legs. Her legs are also in her opinion the best feature of her body, They are long, toned and curved in a way that completely compliments the rest of her body, they are also always void of and body hair itself and on her right inner thigh there would rest a tattoo of a black rose to symbolize her dark, violent yet caring nature. Her feet are rather small though not freakishly small and her nails always seem to be painted a different colour every week but her favourite colour is a deep dark red. Kairas skin is always lightly tanned and her body seems to have no signs of tan lines at all, the skin itself is flawless other then the tattoos and is void of most body air aside from that on her had and her eye brows. Height: 1.5 metres Weight: 55kg Eye Color: Purple Hair Color & Style: red
Gallery:- Spoiler:
None
||Rank Information| Letter Rank: A Ninja Rank: Jonin ||Personality| Overall Personality:Kaira was born into a family in the middle class. She was taught how to respect those who are older than her and to only fight when necessary. Kaira is not the type of person who starts arguments, but she is quite capable of ending one with just a few words. A flaw of hers would be that she jumps to conclusions. But most of the time, she normally keeps to herself and helps those who are in need. Kaira is very much like her mother in behavior, she is stubborn, independent and is very strong hearted and willed. Kaira will not allow anyone to walk over her or tell her what to do. Kaira doesn't like Arrogant people. Kaira like's waterfalls. Kaira is handle's a good situation really well and isn't afraid easily When Kaira is out in the public, she is observant and will make time to help those who are in need around her. She likes to spend time with the elderly as the stories that they come up with are always interesting. Kaira is afraid of growing old as she is quite self conscious; her appearance must always be at it's best. Kaira is the type of person who loves the attention, but she does not seek it. There is also a dark side to her as well, Kaira was brought up without friends except for her family. She is the only child and does become bitter when she is lonely, this is the reason why she loves the attention as she never got any when she was younger. Kaira was an orphan she lost her parents when she was 4 Years old. After that time she became very sad and silent. She dislike's Alcohol very much. She dislike's Smoking in general. Kaira likes Animals, espacially Cats and Snakes. Favorite Quote/Saying: Lets play Hobby: cooking Favorite Color: Red Fears: Fire Goals: Become Kage
||Skill Information| Elemental Affinity:Dominant: Water Recessive: Lightning
Skill SpecialtyDominant: Medical Recessive: Ninjutsu
Special Characteristics:- Spoiler:
Name: Improved hand control Rank: D-C Type: Physical Description: The user has decent control of their hands and chakra molding, as such they can cast jutsu faster than the average ninja. (Must have Ninjutsu or Genjutsu as a specialty) The beginner of learning the handseals. There might be some forgetfulness with this but repetition is a way of mastery of this special characteristic. The speed increase is 10% faster than the normal shinobi
Name: Sensory Ninja Rank: B Type: Chakra Requirements:: Requires Med or ninjutsu specialty and no increase Chakra SC Description: The ninja can sense other ninja now through their chakra. Can detect ninja from sixty meters away and can also recognize certain chakra signatures. Once they meet someone they will never forget their signature. Chakra Sensors can detect chakra type, chakra capacity, and how far away someone is. ( requires 1 post of concentration, just standing there focusing chakra for five meters for one post of awareness. Each post of constant concentration will up the range by 5 meters)
Name: Master Chakra control Rank:A Type: Chakra Requirements:: Requires Med specialty Dominate and no increase Chakra SC And Advence chakra control Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra now you truly are a master, ou have a complete understanding on chakra, able to perform techniques with little to no fatigue. The lower the technique the more control you have over it. With naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, B rank cost off of S rank jutsu and below
Name: Improved Evasion Rank: B-A Type: Physical Description: The user can evade even better now with most projectiles they can dodge better, roll like a doughnut etc. They can evade more techniques now. The user cannot continue to evade attack after attack though. Improved Evasion only makes it less likely for an attack to hit more so then before ( must have evasion).
Traits:- Spoiler:
2. Medium herbie. The skills are upon par with the normal herbalist. Your skills are an improvement of the small time days where you had only the basic of knowledge. You know which herbs are suitable for minor to less than serious injuries. Your medicine now can help cure some poisons but of course, not all of them. You can now make poison yourself. How exciting! You can make poisons or healing salves, but nothing above B-Rank. You arent that good yet.
2. The adavanced gardner: You are beginning to find more and more plants for you to not only plant but also study for research. With the increase of knowledge, you'll know what plants are good for your housing, what are good vegetables and fruits to plant, what trees are suitable in weather and what herbs that can be sold to herablist.
||History| Family: None History:- Spoiler:
.:: PAST ::.
- Not much is truely known about Kairas past other then what she has told a select few people, one of the more notable events in her live is when she was a ninja in the village hidden in the Rain. At the young age of twelve, Kaira has already perfected her own style for her clans kenjutsu techniques and when this was shown to her very jealous mother, her mother planned to have Kaira removed from the clan once and for all. When Kaira was sleeping, her mother slipped into her room and tried to kill Kaira in her sleep, but luckily Kaira had heard her mother enter and had woken just in time to stop the attack, after a brief struggle Kaira struck her mother down and quickly fled the Shi'gawa home. As she fled several Rain-nin had noticed the blood stained girl and began to chase after her, thinking they were going to take her back to the village she weaved through a tight passage only she knew about as a child and that she had filled with various traps, killing the pursuing ninja. Due to this event Kaira has been constantly wanted by the Rain Village, and she has been unable to sleep at night for no more then three to four hours at a time.
Kaira was born into a family of two brothers and three sisters. Her mother died Kumori was kind and gentle and her father was compelled by her kindness. Kaira witnessed death for the first time at age two when her youngest brother Fuishen suffered and died from a blood illness that was passed along by his father. Only one other child in Kaira's family had this illness, and that was Kaira herself.
The village doctors and Kairas father believed she herself would be dead by age three. Kaira prevailed and kept her life, although the illness still affected her abilities to move and live regularly. She often experienced pain from the illness. Her father instilled in her mind that pain led to weakness, and weakness was not acceptable. Because of this, Kaira learned at an early age to hid her pain. Tragedy struck the family once again when Kaira was four. Kumori was killed on an attack to the village, leaving Kaira and her many siblings under the care of her father, Kei. After his wife's death, Kei was relentless and harsh in caring for his children.
Two of Kaira's sisters, Miah and Sein, died first under the cruel training of Kei. This left Kaira's brother Lea and her remaining sister Lilah. Lea died after receiving a beating from Kei when Kei was angered by a moment of weakness that Kaira experienced in training. Lea's death haunted Kaira and she vowed to never let anyone be punished because of her.
Remaining in the broken family was Lilah and Kaira. They were best friends; the only friends either had ever had. Both dreamed of escaping Kei's wrath, but this dream never came fully true. Kaira had also hoped of changing her father's actions. She hoped to change him for the better.. For bother Lilah and herself. Her father was not changeable though and Lilah died in an "accident" while training. This left Kaira alone with her father and his training. His harsh behavior and raising led to Kairas cold outer personality. He is also responsible for her fear of fire and her many scars, primarily the large burn scar on her right arm. Since she received this scar, Kaira keeps her right upper arm bandaged to hide it.
When Kaira was 7, her father died. His cause of death is unknown and Kaira refuses to talk about it, although many villagers believe she finally retaliated and fought back to her father's torture. They had known all along of Kei's actions, yet none had done anything to help his children. Growing up and seeing the village's lack of care and compassion led to her development of sarcasm and lack of trust in others. After Kei's death, Kaira was put into the care of the very people she grew up disliking.
The village enrolled her in ninja academy and she began her training. All expected her to fail because of the setbacks she experienced from her illness still present in her blood. Contrary to their beliefs though Kaira excelled through her classes and learned the many aspects of her training. Her Kenjutsu studies strengthened her beliefs in kindness and caring and her harsh outer core was slightly broken down. She first trusted others for the first time in a long time when she was placed in her first squad, consisting of two boys named Gehn and Vain. These two became her closest friends throughout her studying and training.
.:: ACADEMY ::.
- Kaira was rather lazy when it came ot the academy, often not showing up at all just to simply stay at home and train with her blade or go for walks and runs where she shouldnt. This often landed her in trouble many times and kept her back from officialy passing the academy although she had already learnt the jutsu and shown the skills required to do so, when she did pass the instructors were more then over joyed to see the troublesome Shi'gawa leave.
.:: CHUNIN ::. During her chunin exams, events took a turn for the worst. Vain, the boy Kaira had grown to love, betrayed the team and killed Gehn in an argument. Kaira, under Gehn's request, fled the scene. Eventually, Vain tracked her down and attacked. Kaira, in order to survive and to avenge her friend, fought back. Vain lost the battle and died due to his injuries. Kaira escaped virtually unharmed except for a long thin cut on the left side of her face. This cut left a scar that is a constant reminder to Kaira about the events that happened that day. She would never trust anyone easily again.
.:: JOUNIN ::.
- As she grew older Kaira found herself at the gates of Konoha, entering with the escrot of Anbu and other nin, she had met with the hokage and joined the village in a hope to correct some of the damage she has done. She now resides there permanently as a resident doctor in the hospital and also now has begun to lead her own squad.
.:: OTHER ::. Not much is truely known about Kairas past other then what she has told a select few people, one of the more notable events in her live is when she was a ninja in the village hidden in the Rain. At the young age of twelve, Kaira has already perfected her own style for her clans kenjutsu techniques and when this was shown to her very jealous mother, her mother planned to have Kaira removed from the clan once and for all. When Kaira was sleeping, her mother slipped into her room and tried to kill Kaira in her sleep, but luckily Kaira had heard her mother enter and had woken just in time to stop the attack, after a brief struggle Kaira struck her mother down and quickly fled the Shi'gawa home.
As she fled several Rain-nin had noticed the blood stained girl and began to chase after her, thinking they were going to take her back to the village she weaved through a tight passage only she knew about as a child and that she had filled with various traps, killing the pursuing ninja. Due to this event Kaira has been constantly wanted by the Rain Village, and she has been unable to sleep at night for no more then three to four hours at a time.
||Face Claim| Series/Game:Name:RP example: - Spoiler:
From. http://z13.invisionfree.com/DBZ_Aftermath/index.php?showtopic=5818 casually browsed around the shops she had decided to visit for the day. She needed to let Krillin have the house today so that it could be cleaned. There was a whole bunch of crap in there that they didn't use anymore or was just simply too old and useless. Unfortunately they couldn't include Roshi in that list so he was off too; most likely getting into trouble somewhere. She picked out a shirt and held it over her torso to see how it would look. Deciding against it she put it back on the rack and kept looking. She didn't need too much, just a few outfits to replace the ones that were either too out of style or too worn out to wear anymore. She didn't have that many to begin with since she was usually tight for money. Because of this she had to be picky about the clothes she wore since she had to rotate through them quite often. She didn't want to look like someone who was completely out of touch with today's style but she still had to be careful not to spend too much. It was sort of tricky but having had to do this for a few years, she had gotten used to it. It took a bit more searching but she finally found something that suited her tastes. Once everything was paid for she left the store and walked to a secluded spot before taking off into the sky and heading for home. Krillin better have everything cleared out by the time she got back. Once she was airborne it didn't take her too long to reach the water. Flying over the ocean she soon caught sight of the island where she spent most of her days. The first thing she noticed was the pile of boxes stacked up on the beach. She had thought he was going to get it all off the island by the time she got back but it didn't matter all that much. So long as all the crap was outside and the house was still spotless then that was all that mattered. Upon landing on the island she was quite surprised to see Krillin just lying on the ground. Not only was he not conscious but all his hair was gone. Now something was definitely up, Krillin knew full well that she didn't like him bald, not to mention she highly doubted that he would just take a nap out on the beach like this. She dropped her shopping bags off to the side and knelt down to get a closer look at him. She quickly noticed he had bruises all over him; it looked like he had gotten into a fight. Who the hell would come all the way out here to beat up her husband? She had made a few enemies over the course of her life but none of them knew anything about her family or where she lived. Considering that she was extremely difficult to follow she had never worried that anyone would find this place. But someone obviously had, and had decided it would be a good idea to shave his head no less. Her scanners detected that his vitals were stable so he wasn't in any danger, in fact he would likely wake up soon. Once he did she would find out who did this and go have her vengeance. Picking him up, she opened the door and carried the short man inside, laying him down on the couch. While waiting for him to wake up she went into the kitchen to grab a towel and she soaked it in water before carrying it over to him. She threw it on his forehead to prevent any kind of fever from rising, but mainly so he could use it to wipe his head clean. She had noticed the jar of wax on her way in and could tell from the gleam of his bald scalp that whoever had shaved him had also decided to apply some to his head. While there was nothing to do about it now there was no way he was keeping it like that, he was going to grow it back just like he had when they had first gotten married. Taking a seat in the chair near the couch she folded her arms and waited for him to wake up before she started questioning him. "So it looks like you got beaten up by someone. Do you know who it was?" This was the first thing she needed to know, whether this was something she had brought on him or just a random act of violence that happened to pass by the island. She wasn't too worried about his recovery; the blonde woman knew he'd be just fine. He had been through much worse and come out of it in no time so something like this didn't worry her. She was confident that soon this would just be an unpleasant memory and they would go back to their usual lives as soon as his hair was back.
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| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Mon Sep 12, 2011 9:06 pm | |
| everything done clan needs approving thats it and SC and traits |
| | | Shiro Hazuki Mizukage
Posts : 233 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:27 pm | |
| Please use the correct template |
| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:47 pm | |
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| | | Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:52 pm | |
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- Need to put Kumogakure at the very top
- Ninja Rank: Jinchuriki/genin - Demons are not posted yet so you cannot be a Jinchuriki yet
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| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:22 pm | |
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| | | Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:24 pm | |
| - Quote :
Name: Basic Chakra control Rank: D-C Type: Chakra Requirements:: Requires Med or ninjutsu specialty and no increase Chakra SC Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra you put out but being a beginner, you have basic knowledge on the matter at hand. with naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, E rank cost off of C rank jutsu and below
Name: Advence Chakra control Rank: B Type: Chakra Requirements:: Requires Med specialty and no increase Chakra SC And basic chakra control Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra you put out now being a session pro in this art,You have understanding about the amount of chakra you place into your techniques. Techniques that require little to almost no focus,. The lower the technique, the better you save on chakra.. with naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, C rank cost off of A rank jutsu and below
Name: Master Chakra control Rank:A Type: Chakra Requirements:: Requires Med specialty Dominate and no increase Chakra SC And Advence chakra control Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra now you truly are a master, ou have a complete understanding on chakra, able to perform techniques with little to no fatigue. The lower the technique the more control you have over it. With naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, B rank cost off of S rank jutsu and below
These three count as one. Pick a level then delete the other two. Basic is level 1, Advance level 2, and Master level 3. - Quote :
3. Herb King. A master among the masters. The herb king trait is one that you taken, achieving skills that makes you quite a legend. This character (You) have full knowledge of what poisons can quickly kill or cause an excuritating death. You know which herbs for the correct salves in order to fix a deadly poison, your knowledge of where there are S-Rank poisons and salves and below
3. The Horticulturist: The mastery of understanding what plants are necessary for the soil to become more fertile, what is the best plant for the climate, which plants can be edible if a person is stuck in the wilderness, what herbs can be sold to herbalist or the markest. You are a master among the masters of horticulture and you can teach other gardners as wel.
2. The Undeterred: You have practiced so much you have developed a routine. This routine allows you to adapt with your muscles, so you're less fatigue than with most. Your chakra is starting to become balance and because of that, you have 25% less word req when training jutsu
You may only have one level 3 and two level 2s.
- Personality - Both Paragraphs need to be 150+ words.
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| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:39 pm | |
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| | | Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:43 pm | |
| All checks out fine with me.
Need Approval from Kage for Jounin Rank. |
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| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 2:31 pm | |
| I honestly hate to judge your effort, but I need to see a better rp sample for this rank. I will give you a period of 48 hours to re-do it if you're willing, if not I would be more than happy with you being a Chuunin. |
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| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:07 pm | |
| Still would like for you to remain as Chuunin. Thanks. Cleared for Chuunin. |
| | | Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:08 pm | |
| Due to the verdict, you will have to edit your application to Chunin standards. When you are finished, please bump the topic. |
| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:10 pm | |
| why what wrong with it now it always the lesser positions not even a reason why
its just as good as other jonins |
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| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:26 pm | |
| - Quote :
- why what wrong with it now it always the lesser positions not even a reason why
its just as good as other jonins You want reasons? Ok, that's understandable. Here: - Quote :
- 18 casually browsed around the shops she had decided to visit for the day. She needed to let Krillin have the house today so that it could be cleaned. There was a whole bunch of crap in there that they didn't use anymore or was just simply too old and useless. Unfortunately they couldn't include Roshi in that list so he was off too; most likely getting into trouble somewhere. She picked out a shirt and held it over her torso to see how it would look. Deciding against it she put it back on the rack and kept looking. She didn't need too much, just a few outfits to replace the ones that were either too out of style or too worn out to wear anymore. She didn't have that many to begin with since she was usually tight for money. Because of this she had to be picky about the clothes she wore since she had to rotate through them quite often. She didn't want to look like someone who was completely out of touch with today's style but she still had to be careful not to spend too much. It was sort of tricky but having had to do this for a few years, she had gotten used to it. It took a bit more searching but she finally found something that suited her tastes. Once everything was paid for she left the store and walked to a secluded spot before taking off into the sky and heading for home. Krillin better have everything cleared out by the time she got back.
Once she was airborne it didn't take her too long to reach the water. Flying over the ocean she soon caught sight of the island where she spent most of her days. The first thing she noticed was the pile of boxes stacked up on the beach. She had thought he was going to get it all off the island by the time she got back but it didn't matter all that much. So long as all the crap was outside and the house was still spotless then that was all that mattered. Upon landing on the island she was quite surprised to see Krillin just lying on the ground. Not only was he not conscious but all his hair was gone. Now something was definitely up, Krillin knew full well that she didn't like him bald, not to mention she highly doubted that he would just take a nap out on the beach like this. She dropped her shopping bags off to the side and knelt down to get a closer look at him. She quickly noticed he had bruises all over him; it looked like he had gotten into a fight. Who the hell would come all the way out here to beat up her husband? She had made a few enemies over the course of her life but none of them knew anything about her family or where she lived. Considering that she was extremely difficult to follow she had never worried that anyone would find this place. But someone obviously had, and had decided it would be a good idea to shave his head no less. Her scanners detected that his vitals were stable so he wasn't in any danger, in fact he would likely wake up soon. Once he did she would find out who did this and go have her vengeance.
Picking him up, she opened the door and carried the short man inside, laying him down on the couch. While waiting for him to wake up she went into the kitchen to grab a towel and she soaked it in water before carrying it over to him. She threw it on his forehead to prevent any kind of fever from rising, but mainly so he could use it to wipe his head clean. She had noticed the jar of wax on her way in and could tell from the gleam of his bald scalp that whoever had shaved him had also decided to apply some to his head. While there was nothing to do about it now there was no way he was keeping it like that, he was going to grow it back just like he had when they had first gotten married. Taking a seat in the chair near the couch she folded her arms and waited for him to wake up before she started questioning him. "So it looks like you got beaten up by someone. Do you know who it was?" This was the first thing she needed to know, whether this was something she had brought on him or just a random act of violence that happened to pass by the island. She wasn't too worried about his recovery; the blonde woman knew he'd be just fine. He had been through much worse and come out of it in no time so something like this didn't worry her. She was confident that soon this would just be an unpleasant memory and they would go back to their usual lives as soon as his hair was back. The writing style isn't as bad as we've seen, but it's not high enough quality for me to become a Jounin. Quality is the key; The length is small, and it leads to a common situation [not saying that all RP samples have to be intense, but if there common situation it needs to be more in depth on details]. - Quote :
- she grew older Kaira found herself at the gates of Konoha, entering with the escrot of Anbu and other nin, she had met with the hokage and joined the village in a hope to correct some of the damage she has done. She now resides there permanently as a resident doctor in the hospital and also now has begun to lead her own squad.
Escort of ANBU? Ok, lets be sure about this reference to the Black Ops. program: Who do they protect? Do they escort anyone in the open? Why would they be at the gates? That along with several other poor references and with the size of the history leads us to believe you'd be better suited as a Chuunin. I can continue with the reasons if you wish. Also, Jounin is full. |
| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:35 pm | |
| now it is just magically full typical |
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| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:38 pm | |
| - Quote :
- now it is just magically full typical
Do you mind explaining what your complaint is? Because I don't see what's wrong with being a Chuunin. |
| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:40 pm | |
| never mind ill just accept the chunin postion and changed the app acording to the rank |
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| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:41 pm | |
| Understandable, thanks for joining Kumogakure. |
| | | Sirena Shimizu
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-08-28
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:31 pm | |
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| | | Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Thu Sep 15, 2011 10:23 pm | |
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- You never edited your letter rank to B or your ninja rank to Chunin
- Only B rank and below special characteristics
- Traits - You may have one level 2 and one level 1
- Personality still needs 150+ words for both paragraphs
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| | | Iavas Kumo Chunin
Posts : 187 Join date : 2011-02-01
| Subject: Re: Kaira Rose Wed Oct 05, 2011 7:09 am | |
| Archived due to lack of progress for well over a week. |
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