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PostSubject: Izumi's Jutsu    Izumi's Jutsu  EmptySat Apr 30, 2011 1:34 pm

Non Elemental:

Raiton:

Doton:

Taijutsu:


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PostSubject: Re: Izumi's Jutsu    Izumi's Jutsu  EmptySat Apr 30, 2011 6:33 pm

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Rank: C
Users: Bird Summoners
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity:
Training Link:
Description: This technique summons a flock of countless birds, dazzling the enemy. The user can freely manipulate the birds by emitting chakra from his fingertips and altering it into high frequency waves. Since the crows continuously clone themselves, the target becomes completely surrounded, obscuring their field of vision. When no longer needed, the birds will simply disappear in a puff of smoke. Requires a summoning contract with birds.

"Countless" is not exactly a good number to see when dealing with a C rank, or any, jutsu, you're going to have to make a reasonable amount for your rank.

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Name of Jutsu: Raiton: Ken-Shiten - Blade extension
Rank: E - S
Users: Izumi Takeshi
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Raiton
Training Link:
Description: A simple technique that allows the user to perform with their weapons with a much higher output of power. This jutsu requires no hand seals, instead requiring the bladed weapon to be in hand at the time of activation. When this is done the blade will be immersed in lightning chakra, which will buzz, and spark around the weapon. It costs an E rank amount of chakra to maintain after the initial release. The user can "burst" the amount when attacking - which means to add more chakra - to create other effects. See below for more details.

Lower amounts, such as E to D, can cause minor numbness around the areas the blade touches (lasts 2 posts - affected and wears off their second post).

C amounts allow her to stun the area around the blade touched - about a third of a limb (lasts three posts - affected, their second their numb, and third it wears off).

B rank allows her to stun two thirds of one whole limb (lasts four posts - affected, numb for two of their, wears off on their fourth). This leaves behind some tingling for C and B.

A rank can allow her to stun the whole limb and around the area where the joint connects. This leaves behind some nerve damage which results in uncontrollable twitching and fidgeting for roughly five posts Numbness lasts for five - affected, three of their posts, and the fifth wears off.

S rank amounts can leave damage to the nervous system in at least half the targets body. This leaves very uncontrollable twitching/fidgeting/shaking for roughly five posts and nearly leaves the foe immobile for the post their affected and three posts after - allowing for an easy attack. The fifth post they will still be nub but can start working at about 10% speed. Sixth post they can start moving at about a third of their speed. Seventh they can move at half and eight is when it will start to wear off more. By the eight post they will still fidget occasionally but the severity won't be as bad.

Considering that channeling your chakra into a weapon isn't exactly the easiest thing to do, E & D rank should be removed. Also, your numbers for S rank is too high, lower the time for the effects and/or lower the effects.

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Name of Jutsu: Raiton: Tori Shuriken - Lightning Release: Bird Shuriken
Rank: C
Users: Bird Summoners
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Raiton
Training Link:
Description: This technique is only accessible to those who possess the bird summoning contract. Roughly 30 small lightning birds are summoned. These electrical birds will fly towards the target and will surround the target from all around. They will fly around the target while some dive bomb into the target. These birds will pursue their target like homing devices until they are able to hit the target. Upon impact they will erupt into small blasts of electricity. Each bird will cause numbness for about a post. When combined these birds are capable of temporarily paralysing the target for at least three of the targets posts - will wear off after the targets fourth post. These birds act much like shuriken although they are slightly bigger and each take the shape of small boomerang like bolts of lightning.

Again, the number of birds is not comforting for its rank, make it an A rank or lower the number of birds.

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Name of Jutsu: Raiton: Kaminari Shuriken - Lightning Release: Lightning Shuriken
Rank: B
Users: Any
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Raiton
Training Link:
Description: The user augments the shuriken with Raiton chakra then throws it above his enemy. This will rain down sever bolts of lightning towards the opponent, opening passing over or hitting them. This technique does not require the use of handseals.

The bolded and yellow area would make this an A rank jutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Izumi's Jutsu    Izumi's Jutsu  EmptySat Apr 30, 2011 6:43 pm

Sanzengarasu no Jutsu - Scattering One Thousand Birds Technique -
Dropped to 15

Raiton: Ken-Shiten - Blade extension -
Removed E and D

Raiton: Tori Shuriken - Lightning Release: Bird Shuriken -
Dropped to 15 birds

Raiton: Kaminari Shuriken - Lightning Release: Lightning Shuriken -
Edited: "several to seven"
Removed: "This technique does not require the use of handseals."
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PostSubject: Re: Izumi's Jutsu    Izumi's Jutsu  EmptySat Apr 30, 2011 6:55 pm

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Removed: "This technique does not require the use of handseals."

No, that part was fine (My mistake), it was everything with the lightning bolts
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PostSubject: Re: Izumi's Jutsu    Izumi's Jutsu  EmptySat Apr 30, 2011 7:03 pm

Now it's A.
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