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Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Tue May 17, 2011 3:08 pm | |
| Please convert all jutsu to our jutsu template. [ Click] For the sake of cleaning things up I also ask you to place your jutsu in a spoiler and your abilities in a spoiler. By Special Characteristics, we mean by going to the link below and choosing those which fit your clan. Of course, not all will. Everything below this category you may move into the kekegenkai description as another means of cleaning up the topic. [ Click] |
| | | Gecko
Posts : 15 Join date : 2011-04-11
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Tue May 17, 2011 9:44 pm | |
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| | | Iavas Kumo Chunin
Posts : 187 Join date : 2011-02-01
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Tue May 17, 2011 10:05 pm | |
| I'm not done yet, but I figured I might as well put this up for now.
There are some problems with your clan history. Mostly that you found a major village after the 3rd Shinobi War--which is long after the ninja villages have been formed. And then there's the matter of you forming the "Hidden Amongst the Clouds known as Konoha" part. Konoha is Hidden Leaf. And Hidden Leaf was founded by Senjuu and Uchiha waaay back before the 3rd Shinobi War.
Please fix your history accordingly. If I can, I'll get to your bloodline within the next day or so. If not, I suppose Izumi here will take over if she wants.
EDIT: About the three Ikiryou you obtain... Please just describe what Ikiryou are and then simply state you gain one at birth, another one at C Rank and the last one at B Rank instead of posting it three times and only changing Requirements since the descriptions/abilities are the same for each one.
It's not too much of a problem, but it creates unnecessary reading since they have the same abilities/description. |
| | | lifeanddeath S-Rank Criminal
Posts : 475 Join date : 2011-01-28
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Tue May 17, 2011 10:56 pm | |
| The soul is not an applicable weapon within the naruto setting. Thus the entire concept of this bloodline needs to be reworked. |
| | | Gecko
Posts : 15 Join date : 2011-04-11
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Wed May 18, 2011 3:51 pm | |
| Every person has a soul in their body but this clan can use it to different heights, and I didn't say they use it as a actual weapon that you hold in your hand. The soul can be used for jutsu, and when it comes out the body of the user it becomes fleshy and able to be attacked.
Edited what you wanted me to edit |
| | | lifeanddeath S-Rank Criminal
Posts : 475 Join date : 2011-01-28
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Wed May 18, 2011 4:21 pm | |
| No. You miss the point, but I'll rephrase. The soul is not applicable to be used within the current manner of your clan's usage within the naruto setting. Thus the entire concept of this clan needs to be reworked or archived. Weapon or no, the soul cannot be used like this. |
| | | lifeanddeath S-Rank Criminal
Posts : 475 Join date : 2011-01-28
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Wed May 18, 2011 4:39 pm | |
| Clan is overpowered with the addition of the Ikiryo. The jutsu encompass three to four different specialties (not jutsu ninjutsu). FOr example, a toxic chakra esque poison that would need to be removed by a medical technique is a poison, only useable by puppets and medics. You have a technique that amplfies genjutsu. You have a transformation jutsu, weaponry techniques, and ninjutsu. THe clan to too broad to be considered NOT overpowered, and this is ignoring the impossible factor. Then we take into consideration you are partially undead, and when the Ikriyo transform, etc, they are made out of steel and can transform into other weapons. You can also digest one of them and restore chakra, as well as you heal "extremely fast".
The soul is a set really a set concept given the current canon information. Souls cannot be used in the manner you're trying to utilize them in, genes or no, you cannot use the soul in this manner. No to mention, removal of the soul from sections of the body causes those sections of the body to experience atrophy and essentially death. Thus extracting your soul from the body entirely would kill you instantly.
Thus the entire concept is currently denied. |
| | | Annie D-Rank Criminal
Posts : 807 Join date : 2011-01-28
| Subject: Re: Konjou Clan Wed May 18, 2011 5:03 pm | |
| How are you guys modding this with out an OP? Where is it? |
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