Name of Jutsu: Sokudo (Velocity)
Rank: D-S
Users: Ozunu/Sinota
Type of Jutsu:: Supplementary
Element Affinity: Fuuton/Suiton
Training Link: -
Description: Velocity is a high powered force produced from Suiton and Fuuton chakra being combined. It’s a close range point of impact resulting in general destruction of a target within three feet of arms reach. The level of the shinobi depends on its destructive potential. This can be manifest in the form of raw chakra bundled into the users palm. Or can be channeled into a weapon of some sort.


Name of Jutsu: Flicker Blade
Rank: C
Users: Clous Sinota
Type of Jutsu: Attack
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Training Link: -
Description: A bundle of wind chakra is collected into the hand and the rushed through the arm, expanding the muscles slightly before rushing back through the hand and extending out into the weapon creating a blurred after image along its intended path, which hopefully will result in the target miss-judging the point of impact.

Name of Jutsu: Wind Blade [Jin no Yaiba] ??
Rank: C
Users: Clous Sinota
Type of Jutsu: Attack
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Training Link: -
Description: Using this technique the user can create an extended sharpened edge made of wind from their hands or an already existing weapon. Clous uses this jutsu to strengthen the cutting potential of his weapons to give him an added "edge" in battle. It can last fairly indefinitely unless a stronger source of chakra comes into contact to disrupt the effect.


Name of Jutsu: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Users: Clous Sinota
Type of Jutsu: Supplementary
Element Affinity: Suiton
Training Link: -
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.


Name of Jutsu: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Users: Clous Sinota
Type of Jutsu: Supplementary
Element Affinity: Suiton
Training Link: -
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.


Name of Jutsu: Underwater Breathing Technique [Suichuu Ikidzukai no Jutsu]
Rank: D
Users: Clous Sinota
Type of Jutsu: Supplementary
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Training Link: -
Description: A basic jutsu whereby one uses chakra to force a large amount of air into the lungs. After which, the user then holds his or her breath and uses chakra to artificially recycle the air in their lungs to make the most of it. The end result is that the user is able to hold his or her breath for up to five minutes longer.

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A basic jutsu whereby one uses chackra to force a large amount of air into the lungs. After which, the user then holds his or her breath and uses chackra to artificially recycle the air in their lungs to make the most of it. The end regovita is that the user is able to hold his or her breath for up to five minutes longer.

I think I mentioned this before on Shinobi Armada but the way this jutsu is described, it seems more like a Fuuton jutsu.

Feint Blow - You say there's a difference between "Light" & "Dark", but never explained which one your character is utilizing.

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preferably by air the chakra stored in the hand flares out becoming visible.

Im not able to understand what you're trying to say here so please rephrease that.

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A bundle of wind chakra is collected into the hand and the rushed through the arm, expanding hte muscles slightly before rushing back through the hand.

This doesnt make any sense to me, you're utilizing Fuuton chakra to expand your muscles but that doesn't exactly click in my head because wind doesn't affect your muscles. Even if you were using chakra, that doesn't even seem to have anything to do with the jutsu's intended purpose.

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extending out into the weapon creating a type of before image showing off its intended path. However the forward image blurs out the actualy weapon which results in the target mis-judging the point of impact.

The wording confused be greatly but are you referring to an inverted after image?

If so, then it doesn't make too much sense for it to go before the actual object unless it was some sort of Genjutsu.

Well I haven't decided on which he'll use yet >.>

And it's not hte wind that does anything. It's just hte chakra itself that expands the muscles making it easier for oxygen to flow etc etc. Teh wind eleemtn comes in after when it's rushign back to the hand.

As for the imaging thing...imagine taking a pincel and waving it infront of your face. you see several images be it before or after usually around three or more. Better yet, do it at night with little ligt and you'll get that effect.

You'll have to decide before that jutsu can be approved (SO it can be a locked decision)

But what does that in itself have to do with the jutsu

If you concentrate deeply, you'll notice that there's never an instant where the image comes before the pen, your brain just thinks that on a broader level. Taking that into account, try that same thing but instead of back and forth, keep flicking the pen in one direction and pay attention to the side that's directed forward compared the other. An after image is where the eyes sees something and sends it to the brain and the brain accepts another image before completely storing it within your memory. (Or something like that) but there's no reason why the image would come before the object.

((sorry was away for a bit))

I've decided to give Clous a neutral allignment so that woudl be a mix of both.

Ok ok I've decided to switch it a bit. It creates and after image while pushing the blade in a single direction. Which makes changing the swords direction difficul when it's used. And probably add muscle strain however how much I'll have to try out IC.

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I've decided to give Clous a neutral allignment so that woudl be a mix of both

Define this "mix" in terms of abilities and powers

standby clan being re-worked abilites will be changing

I think this is ready

Please put all jutsus in the proper template format.

What's missing?

It is missing BB coding. Use this:

Code:

[b][u]Name of Jutsu:[/b][/u]
[b][u]Rank:[/b][/u]
[b][u]Users:/[b][/u]
[b][u]Type of Jutsu:[/b][/u]
[b][u]Element Affinity:[/b][/u]
[b][u]Training Link:[/b][/u]
[b][u]Description:[/b][/u]

m'kay

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The checking of your techniques is completely based on your clan's approval, due to those being the only custom jutsu you have.

*el bumpo

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Name of Jutsu: Sokudo (Velocity)
Rank: D-S
Users: Ozunu/Sinota
Type of Jutsu:: Supplementary KKG
Element Affinity: Fuuton/Suiton
Training Link: -
Description: Velocity is a high powered force produced from Suiton and Fuuton chakra being combined. It’s a close range point of impact resulting in general destruction of a target within three feet of arms reach. The level of the shinobi depends on its destructive potential. This can be manifest in the form of raw chakra bundled into the users palm. Or can be channeled into a weapon of some sort.

I can understand everything here except what it has to do with Fuuton or Suiton.

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Name of Jutsu:
Rank:
Users: Clous Sinota
Type of Jutsu: Attack KKG
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Training Link: -
Description: A bundle of wind chakra is collected into the hand and the rushed through the arm, expanding the muscles slightly before rushing back through the hand and extending out into the weapon creating a blurred after image along its intended path, which hopefully will result in the target miss-judging the point of impact.

You're missing a name and rank

1st

Its the high pressure technique used by the clan that I was somewhat trying to explain. Combines water and wind and rotated both in opposite directions before discharging.

2nd

Fixed

It still seems like you're adding unnecessary variables into the mix but I'll work with it.

Simply remove the term "KKG' from all your techniques and you're fine.

yeah, sorry if im making it difficult, that's really not my goal.

Approved

Archived due to user's inactivity ~