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Pattycakes
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| Subject: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Tue May 10, 2011 6:48 pm | |
| The A Rank Missing Ninja Abelard |Basics| Name: Abelard Age: 26 Physical Age: 18 Mental Age: 30 Gender: Male ||Appearance| General Appearance:The Missing Ninja Abelard stands small in stature at around 5' 7" tall. This gives him a somewhat overlooked advantage over his enemies, who often expect small people to be relatively less dangerous. Additionally, it allows Abelard to blend into the background much more easily, making him a smaller target. Abelard's face is soft, with the beginning lines of laughter and bright, broad smiles. His face reflects his personality quite well. It provides yet another advantage against his opponents, as he looks like a genuinely nice guy, and certainly not the type to pose any sort of challenge. He has very soft cheekbones and his features in general are not tough. His naturally clear skin has no acne or other blemishes, and is completely devoid of scars. He has deep hazel eyes which seem innocent despite the life he's led as a ninja. Inside them you would find no fear or hatred. He has straight brown hair which doesn't come farther down than his ears. It is obvious to anyone that he cuts it himself, but it doesn't look ugly or unclean. His body type seems to be a mix between a Mesomorph and an Ectomorph. He is extremely toned, though he has average strength. His muscles are built for endurance, and can perform for hours without break. His legs are used to running for long periods of time, and have been trained both aerobically and anaerobically. His feet are of average size, and hardly notable, not standing out or anything. Abelard has slight hands which are great at highly dextrous movements. Both his hands and feet are covered in callouses from years of hard work. Abelard's body is generally devoid of scars or other abrasions. He has fairly light skin that tans easily. For clothing, he wears a very basic, long green tunic over a white shirt. He wears tight black trousers, and a simple leather belt with an iron clasp. Attached to his belt in two sheaths are his Saxe knife and his somewhat larger than average throwing knife. On the other side of his belt, there is two small pouches. The first pouch contains 5 Kunai, 10 Senbon, and 3 Shuriken. The Second pouch contains a pain relieving salve in a bottle(not really useful on anything but small cuts and gashes), a bottle of disinfectant (Iodine), some bandages, a roll of steel wire. Over his Tunic, Abelard wears a green and greyish green mottled cloak, which makes him quite effective at blending into his surroundings. The cowl of this cloak comes up above Abelard and casts a shadow that hides his face effectively. The cloak reaches down to mid calf. Across his neck, Abelard wears a silver oakleaf, a symbol of his rank in the Ranger Clan. Strung across his back is a quiver that is broken up into several compartments and holds a total of 50 arrows. His quiver is very basic, brown and made of leather. Height: 5' 7" Weight: 130Lbs Eye Color: Hazel Hair Color & Style: Straight, brown, short hair. ||Rank Information| Letter Rank: A Ninja Rank: Missing Ninja ||Skill Information| Elemental Affinity: Dominant: Fuuton Recessive: Raiton Skill Specialty Dominant: Weaponry - Kenjutsu -Projectile
Recessive: Ninjutsu Distribution Points: Strength: 31 Dexterity: 200 Speed: 88 Stamina: 31 Total: 350 Special Characteristics: - Spoiler:
Tracking/Senses: This skill gives the user a good ability with his senses, being able to track opponents from a distance without them knowing, no matter the ranking the person is most of the time. They have high senses and are able to effectively use their abilities to keep their senses tuned on an opponent. These are your stealth-type characters. The prerequisites for the senses skill is Chakra Control. If you can just track and are not in tune with your senses then there is no prerequisite.
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High Speed Description: This trait does not only account for attack speed with swords as well. Is trait is more along the lines of enhancing your movements and weapon movements with little to no struggle.
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Dead-Eye: Character's with this trait are extremely adept at ranged attacks, their projectiles rarely miss their target when not met with an outside force.[Requires Weaponry]
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||Personality| Overall Personality:Abelard's personality is complex in that he holds one to the general public and a completely different one to close friends. To outsiders, he appears cold and hard. This tends to add to the general public's apprehensiveness about those of the Rangers clan. Many think that Rangers are sorcerers and can turn invisible. So, to most, Abelard is cold, though not unkind or impolite. He Abelard reveal very little to those he doesn't know, and his very cryptic in his responses. He keeps to himself in general, and because of this, when not around friends or peers, Abelard is very lonely. This facade of a personality is not how he really thinks of strangers, and whenever he needs to be disguised as something other than a member of the Ranger clan, he can be incredibly open and friendly. He uses this facade in battle as well, being cold and calculating to his enemies, and treating them as if they are beneath him. When Abelard is around his friends, however, he becomes a completely different person. He is an incredibly open person, and has one of the lightest senses of humour one could possibly imagine. He is always smiling, and one of the most important aspects of his personality is that he is always asking questions. He has incredible kindness to his friends and peers, and also a very childlike innocence despite seeing the things he has. Even though he acts like this around his friends, completely at rest, Abelard's guard is never down. It is a result of years of training, he is always ready for something happen, and always looking for something out of the ordinary. In addition, he is constantly on the look out for deception. That is not to say that he distrusts his friends, but rather that he looks out for them in the event of such treachery. He is very awkward at times when it comes to women. If he has no feelings, he acts completely normal, but tends to stammer if he has feelings and doesn't know them. Once in a solid relationship, Abelard acts normally around them. Favorite Quote/Saying: "Thinking? Now that's a dangerous past time." Hobby: Whittling Favorite Color: Green Fears: Things worth fearing. Goals: To serve his duty to protect the innocent, and become the best at what he does ||History| Birthplace: The Morimura province, Land of Grass Previous Residence: N/A Clan: The Renkaisha Clan Family: Lord and Wife of the Morimura province. No close relatives or siblings. --- Deceased History: - Spoiler:
.:Birth:.
Abelard was born the son of noblemen in the Morimura Province. From a young age, his parents ignored him, and he was taken care of by maids and other indirect caretakers. He grew up lonely, and spoiled. This, luckily for him, would not end up effecting him in a negative way (he did not end up being a spoiled rotten brat). That said, he was given impeccable care as a child, and was a happy child, as at the time, he couldn't comprehend his loneliness. It seemed to him that he had all that he could ask for, as his young mind went. It wasn't until he grew up a little bit more that he would notice the gap in his relationship with his parents.
.:Childhood Arc:.
Growing up, Abelard learned from a young age that he was shorter than other kids of his age. He grew to have a sort of arch-rival with another young rival. Both he and Abelard shared the goal of going to the Ninja Academy. Abelard also shared a friend with his rival. As a child, Abelard never had to participate in chores or the like that most other children had to deal with.
He discovered as a child that despite his size, he had good strength, and often offered to help the servants do such tasks as chopping wood. He also was very witty, and often enraged his rival with quick lashes of the tongue. Invariably, he would be chased, and then climb a tree (Another innate skill he possessed). As he grew older, his manhood approached. He desired so greatly to become a ninja, but did not know if the dream would ever come to fruition.
As he grew to be around 6, he asked his father for a tutor in the way of swordsmanship. His father, seeing this as another means of not having to deal with his son, bought him the most expensive tutor money could buy. And so, as a young boy, Abelard fueled his loneliness into practicing his swordsmanship, and he became quite good. He was indeed a natural with the blade, and most enjoyed training with it.
He also found himself getting into a great deal of mischief as a young boy. He was often found climbing all over the place, and generally causing a ruckus. This mischievous behavior was a direct result of his parent's paying little to no attention to him. He was also finding himself being bullied constantly. He could usually outrun his bullies, and it was usually the case that it was his own tongue that got him into the situation in the first place. He disliked his father too much to tell him what was going on, and such it continued uninterrupted. He grew older and his skill with the sword improved dramatically. The time of the Drawing was finally near, and unfortunately, even as a nobleman, he was not exempt.
.:The Drawing:.
At the time of the Drawing, the Noblemen were gathered in the Lord of Morimura’s Office. There was also present the various craftmasters, all looking to find an apprentice or more. Each of the Childs’ names was individually called. Abelard’s Rival, being naturally strong and tall, was immediately selected for the Ninja Academy. When they got to Abelard, however, he was refused. He pleaded, but to no avail. Abelard's own father, the lord himself looked over at the battlemaster, but he simply replied "I'm sorry m'lord, a boy like that won't make a fine ninja, he is too short". Abelard's father couldn't care less, really, and so he did not press the issue further. That was when a man stood from the shadows, though nobody had noticed him being there before. He stepped across the room and spoke to the Lord of Morimura. He said whispered something in the Lord Morimura’s ear, and then stepped back. The Lord nodded and then spoke “I’ll consider that”. In fact, Abelard's father could care less about the Ranger's proposal, but anything to get his son out of his hair. He set the piece of paper on his desk. Abelard’s eyes fell on it immediately, wanting to know what it said. The Lord then announced that all apprentices were to leave for a feast, then go to their respective new jobs in the morning. Abelard was to return tomorrow for assignment. Abelard left in a bad mood, but with aching curiosity for what that note held.
He returned home knowing full well that he had to know what the note said. He snuck silently out of his bed and made his way to the Lord’s tower. It was long, but even in the night; he could see the light in the room up above. He snuck silently past the two guards watching the area, and then began his ascent. He climbed quickly, eagerness overtaking his body. He almost fell once, slipping on a weak hold. After a few minutes of scaling the building, he finally made his way to the windowsill. There was no window, and so slipping into the room was very easy. Abelard did so without making any noise.
He crept over to the table, seeing that nobody was there. He saw the piece of paper on the table, and carefully picked it up. He opened it to read what it said. “I would like to take the boy as my apprentice”. Suddenly, a hand grabbed his shoulder and a Lamp turned on. He looked around to find the strange ranger as well as Lord of Morimura looking at him. The ranger looked smug. “You see” he said “I told you he would come”. Abelard bowed his head. “Yes, I suppose you were right, Steven.” The lord of Morimura looked at Abelard. “The only fitting punishment I could see for this crime would be for you to become the Ranger Steven’s Apprentice. Seems fair enough to me” Abelard of course looked aghast and couldn’t tell that the Lord was joking. The Lord of Morimura shook his head and then said “Abelard, report to Steven tomorrow at 7am” he then began walking out of the door. “Oh, and use the stairs on your way down” Abelard nodded furiously, again not realizing that it was a joke, and the Lord sighed before returning to his quarters. Sons really could be such a bother.
.:The Ranger’s Apprentice:.
As an Apprentice to the Ranger Steven, Abelard was made to do work many times a day. He was responsible for keeping the small shack he shared with Steven absolutely spotless. Steven also taught him how to kill, clean, and prepare food. After doing this for several months, Abelard and Steven had already laid the kindling for what would be a long and respectful friendship. Steven would feign annoyance at Abelard’s constant barrage of questions, but in truth the old Ranger enjoyed having the company of someone as young as Abelard.
As time went on, Abelard began his training with a Bow and Arrow. He quickly gained proficiency with the Weapon and later developed skills in the throwing knife as well. Steven was also responsible for teaching Abelard the basic Academy techniques for Ninja. Over many months of training, Abelard would gain prowess in the art of stealth and infiltration, as well as weaponry and ninjutsu.
Abelard was taught the most basic art of the Ranger Clan, the Art of Background Melding, allowing Abelard to slip into the shadows and remain unseen. During his training, he and his previous Rival mended things at a festival that was held for the Apprentices of Morimura. That small act of friendship would act to create the basis of yet another powerful friendship. After a long while of training, Abelard and Steven had to Journey to the Gathering, an annual gathering of the Ranger Clan.
.:The Gathering:.
Abelard and Steven made the long and easy journey to the Gathering in just over 3 days. The meeting site was the same one used for over 300 years. However, upon arrival, they found not joyous festivities, but instead frantic activity. Abelard was told to stay behind as Steven investigated. As it turned out, the Rangers were preparing for an invading force from the North. The Skandians, it seemed, were preparing to make an invasion against the residents of the Grass Country. Steven and Abelard were asked to join the battle, which of course they offered their services without question.The Battle was a long and fierce one, which would eventually lead to an overwhelming victory by the Rangers against the overwhelming Skandian force.
Driven back to the north, the Rangers were responsible for yet another keeping of the peace. For his performance in the anti-invasion skirmish, Abelard was given the rank of full-fledged apprentice. This was with some anxiety. Despite the fact that Rangers in general were not allowed to carry swords, Abelard was allowed to, since he already had exceptional skill in swordsmanship.
.:The Passing of Time:.
Several years passed with very little happening. In this time, Abelard was given the full title of Ranger, accompanied by the Silver Oakleaf necklace. Upon this appointment, he was separated from his mentor and assigned to work as a countryside patroller. During this 10 year period, Abelard gained skills in both his weapons as well as his Ninjutsu. He became the most skilled archer in the entire Ranger Clan, his Accuracy known far and wide. Abelard sported the Green Mottled Cloak well, proud of what he had become. ||Face Claim| Series/Game: The Ranger's Apprentice Name: Will Treaty
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| | | squirrel101 Mizukage
Posts : 663 Join date : 2011-02-02 Age : 31 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Tue May 10, 2011 8:05 pm | |
| You must have 12 paragraphs at least to be this rank. You are allowed two of the following for your weaponry spec - Quote :
- # Kenjutsu / Bladed – Art of swords that focus on cutting and slicing.
# Projectiles – Long ranged such as bows and arrows and Ten-tens various weaponry techs # Blunt – Obects such as staffs and things that focus on blunt damage. # Piercing – Spears and items that focus on inflicting stabs and jabbing style of wounds. # Exotic – Weapons that don't fit into any other categories.
Dominant Abilities You are allowed 2 of the above categories. Also note: - Quote :
- Recessive Abilities
A recessive Ninjutsu user is allowed 5 more starter Ninjutsu then would other be allowed. In your distribution you have too many points extra than normal jonin are allowed to have. You may only have 175. You have WAY more than you're allowed to have. Also one more thing. You can't have all your mastery's in your special characteristics. You have to add your starting ones. They go from 1>2>3. So you only get six. Please fix this. Just fix these for now and once you do I'll go over it one more time. Other than that your character looks good! |
| | | Pattycakes
Posts : 15 Join date : 2011-05-05
| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Tue May 10, 2011 8:34 pm | |
| - Kiyoshi wrote:
- Alright, you're in.
A - Rank Exp. Jounin lvl. Missing Nin. that says Exp Jounin, which is 205 starting DP so 1, 2 3 are the total values, and I can have 6 in total? (so like, a 1, a 2 and a 3? or 3 1's and 1 3?) |
| | | Oblivion
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| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Tue May 10, 2011 8:52 pm | |
| Stat change Exp Jounin = 350 stat points now
*We JUST changed this, sorry for the trouble* |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Tue May 10, 2011 8:57 pm | |
| Oh my god, I am SO mad at you that I get MORE stat points to spend xDDDD Thanks for the update =] |
| | | squirrel101 Mizukage
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| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Wed May 11, 2011 12:10 pm | |
| You are of an A-rank shinobi. Experience Jounin can at least have two of the higher ranking Special Characteristics...
Seeing that you aren't S-rank rank, you have to lower your high ranking to mid-ranking stats"
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| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Wed May 11, 2011 9:06 pm | |
| Thank you, I'll fix that later, and bump when I'm done! =] |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Thu May 12, 2011 5:44 pm | |
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| | | squirrel101 Mizukage
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| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Thu May 12, 2011 10:20 pm | |
| Pat I meant in your special characteristics that you can only have like six. An example would be like Having one fully trained and one trained to the second set, and the last only trained at the beginning. Basically like that. If that makes sense. |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Abelard (Missing Ninja, A Rank) (Permission from Kiyoshi) Fri May 13, 2011 5:34 pm | |
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