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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:33 pm | |
| Name: Eiji Hitomi Nickname/Aliases:"Souless"
Age:15 Physical Age:15 Mental Age:18 Gender: Male ||Appearance| General Appearance: Eiji stands at 5 ft 6 and weighs about 120 pounds. With hair that is all black. His eyes are hazel brown. His nose is small and pointed. His lips are small and his teeth are white and straight. Eiji's physique is avearge and he has little muscle mass. His abs are not developed yet but can be seen a little from his training. His arms are well developed so thry are capable of holding a weapon twice his height. Eiji wears a coat that was given to him by his father. His coat is whit and sleeveless. Although he is told to do so he hardly wears a shirt. When he does it's a black tank top with "Eiji Hitomi" written in Old English letters across the middle. On occasions Eiji wears fingerless gloves on both hands. The gloves are black wit ha white stripe going down the middle. Eiji's pants are brown but he alternates between wearing brown, black, red, gray, and dark blue. Most shinobi wear traditional ninja shoes but Eiji chooses to wear boots in the winter time and sneakers in the spring and summer time Height: 5'6 Weight: 120 pounds Eye Color: Hazel Brown Hair Color & Style:Short and white Gallery: - Spoiler:
||Rank Information| Letter Rank: D rank Ninja Rank: Genin ||Skill Information| Elemental Affinity: Lighting Dominant: Lighting Recessive: Skill Specialty Weaponry Dominant: Kenjutsu/Bladed Exotic Recessive: Distribution Points:Strength: 13 Dexterity: 21.5 Speed: 22.5 Stamina: 13
Total: 70 Special Characteristics:- Spoiler:
Chakra Control: These users have excellent chakra control, which means they waste little chakra in battle. People with excellent chakra control usually have average or below average chakra. Since the amount of chakra is smaller, it is easier to master control over it. People with this skill are like, Itachi, Kakakshi and Orochimaru.
Basic Control: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra you put out but being a beginner, you have basic knowledge on the matter at hand. You're able a put forth little effort with basic techniques and a few C rank techniques.
Mental Comprehension Description: This character has increased mental capacity, being able to utilize the entirety of their brain. This allows for near instantaneous processing of information, along with complete and total recall of all information, much like a photographic memory
1. A mental laptop: You're able to prcess information well and fine but you can only hold on to long term information for a short while. It's not that you cannot learn more, your mind has to yet to condition itself to learn more and more information. You are able to grasp information and hold onto it, but you're not able to learn too much otherwise you'll begin to lose it.
||Personality| Overall Personality: Eiji is the type of person who has a strong sense of justice. Whenever someone is in danger even if he can't win he will still jump in and try to save them. On a day to day basis he will train for hours at a time and will not stop until the sunrises or sets. In public he has little friends due his intense training methods. He is also not to well with the ladies. Instead of trying to sway them he will confess his feelings without thinking. If he sees something he wants he goes for it. He constantly announces what his plans are and how he will accomplish them reguardless of how out of reach they may seem. Everything Eiji does is in pursue of his dreams. Although he is far from it Eiji wishes to become the savior of the world one day and will constantly train and push his self until he sees that dream a reality. Eiji is also very family orientated. He spends time with his younger sister and brother. Also whenever he can he spends time with his oldest sister as well. Favorite Quote/Saying: "Those who have souls have morals" Hobby: Training Favorite Color: Dark Blue Fears: Being consumed by his own desire to become strong Goals: To become the savior of the world ||History| Birthplace: Konoha Previous Residence: Kumogakure Clan: N/A Family: Mother: Aoi Hitomi, Father: Senji Hitmi, Older Sister: Fumiko Hitmoi, Younger Brother: Dairou Hitomi, Younger Sister: Aura Hitmoi History:- Spoiler:
Eiji is an average shinobi. He has had no tragic events in his life. Both of his parents are in great health and so is he. Eiji is obessed with swords and once he picked one up at the age of 5 he started training more and more. His father helped him whenever he could. Eiji's father is a blacksmith and his mother is a nurse. His father who is skilled in Lighting taught it to Eiji. In the acdemy he did average. He graduated at the age of 9 and continued to train on his own and with his father. He knows little ninjutsu techniques other than the basics. All of his attention has been towards training with swords.
At the age 10 Eiji saw that training in sword techniques would be kind of hard but he didn't care. All he wanted was to have life similiar to that of his mother and father. Also to become the savior of the world. When he spoke his dream at the acemdy and after he graudated many people simply laughed and told him that he had to get in line behind them. Although he didn't stand out in his acemdy days although there were some teachers who saw potentail in him. They asked him to come and see them but his own training got the better of him and he missed appointments and even if he showed up it would be hours later. This is what led to his nickname "Souless" because to others all he did was train like a psycho and then walk around like he had no soul. This nickname also hurt whatever chance he had of getting a girlfriend.
The one thing that drove Eiji was his will to become the best. There would be nights where Eiji would stay outside of the house training until three a.m. Other times he would train in heavy rain and forceful winds. None of this stopped Eiji. He didn't start to show this ambition until he eleven years old. Before then he would train for about five hours and come inside the house. On the eve of his twelth birthday Eiji spent the past few days training for eight hours straight. His sword techniques became better and better. If was becuase of this he slept through most of his birthday. He spent the rest of that day with his family and for once he didn't train. It was on this day that his father gave him his first sword. It was a a metal blade that had a bamboo handle.
Eiji also has a brother and sister(9,12) that are younger than him and an older sister (16). Eiji gets most of the attention because he is the first born male. Growing up Eiji had little friends. That was because of his own seclusion and training. While other kids were out playing Eiji was training. After years of training Eiji learned how to hide his emotions. Others who see him can not read him at all. His father told him that it's a good thing to hide your emotions in battle because the opponent can't read your actions. Also it allows you to keep a cool head when most people would lose theirs. Eiji does spend time with his sisters and brother. Once a week they all come together and just have family time. During that time they each show off what they learned in the past week.
Eiji now trains in secluded parts of the village and can only be seen after he has finished. Very few people conversate with him. Eiji now wants to become the greatest swordsman ever to grace the Five Nations. He knows who he has to measure up to and he doesn't care. He admires the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. One day he wishes to surpass all of them in skill and in rank. In his room are pictures of Kisame, Zabuza, and Suigetsu. These are the men Eiji looks up and one day he hopes to gain a legacy such as theirs.
||Face Claim| Series/Game: King Of Fighters: Redux Name: Orochi
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:56 pm | |
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Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue Feb 15, 2011 6:23 pm | |
| - Please include the Skill information into one post.
- You are missing the Rank information section.
- Include at least two paragraphs of description for the General Appearance area.
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Wed Feb 16, 2011 10:34 am | |
| - Arcadia wrote:
- Please include the Skill information into one post.
- You are missing the Rank information section.
- Include at least two paragraphs of description for the General Appearance area.
I tried several times to put the skill information in one post but for some reason it didn't work. When I try to edit it it shows the rank section up there. I thought if I had a picture I didn't need to write two paragraphs? |
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Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Wed Feb 16, 2011 11:14 am | |
| Ohhh I see what you did there.
Fix the spoiler code for your gallery. Your accidentally placed the rank and skill information within the spoiler. I can then delete the second post so it makes more sense too. Sorry I didn't see that before. I'm busy in school at the moment so me or someone else will have to get back to this later tonight. Again, my apologies for not noticing that sooner and being busy. |
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:01 pm | |
| - Arcadia wrote:
- Ohhh I see what you did there.
Fix the spoiler code for your gallery. Your accidentally placed the rank and skill information within the spoiler. I can then delete the second post so it makes more sense too. Sorry I didn't see that before. I'm busy in school at the moment so me or someone else will have to get back to this later tonight. Again, my apologies for not noticing that sooner and being busy. It's ok I should've payed more attention. I'm just SO eager to get into this story. I LOVE the plot! |
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Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Wed Feb 16, 2011 11:16 pm | |
| Please edit your skill information in your first post so that the second post can be removed. No sense in having the same information twice. Also, you may only have one skill spec, not two. Your skill specs are also the "Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu, etc" not "Strength, Chakra Control, etc". Those are your special characteristics.
You may only start out with 2 special characteristics, not 4. Please revise that.
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:13 am | |
| Done and Done. Oh and Done |
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Kiyoshi Raikage
Posts : 627 Join date : 2011-01-29 Age : 31 Location : Coconut Creek, FL
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:08 am | |
| Approved but before I move your application, you should know that your image has malfunctioned. |
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:33 pm | |
| Damn photobucket. I found another one and changed up his appearence a little. |
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Kiyoshi Raikage
Posts : 627 Join date : 2011-01-29 Age : 31 Location : Coconut Creek, FL
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:35 pm | |
| Moved to the approved section |
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squirrel101 Mizukage
Posts : 663 Join date : 2011-02-02 Age : 31 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Fri May 13, 2011 11:57 am | |
| Edit: As D rank you can only start off with 2 special characteristics. - Quote :
- Weaponry
Simple. People with this skill are marksman's, meaning their weapon aim, accuracy and use is near superb. Their targets hardly ever miss and they keep their tools in the best shape. Characters with this ability would be Ten-Ten. Allowed Weaponry Techniques, Also can store more weapons than others. Only people with weaponry may have weapons with custom abilities or chakra conductive weaponry. There are various types of weaponry techniques such as:
•Kenjutsu / Bladed – Art of swords that focus on cutting and slicing.
•Projectiles – Long ranged such as bows and arrows and Ten-tens various weaponry techs
•Blunt – Obects such as staffs and things that focus on blunt damage.
•Piercing – Spears and items that focus on inflicting stabs and jabbing style of wounds.
•Exotic – Weapons that don't fit into any other categories.
Dominant Abilities
You are allowed 2 of the above categories. So basically what that means is you put weaponry as your skill specialty. And have kenjutsu and another type as your dom. Is unapproved until these are fixed. |
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Fri May 13, 2011 12:58 pm | |
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lifeanddeath S-Rank Criminal
Posts : 475 Join date : 2011-01-28
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Fri May 13, 2011 1:47 pm | |
| - squirrel101 wrote:
- Edit: As D rank you can only start off with 2 special characteristics.
- Quote :
- Weaponry
Simple. People with this skill are marksman's, meaning their weapon aim, accuracy and use is near superb. Their targets hardly ever miss and they keep their tools in the best shape. Characters with this ability would be Ten-Ten. Allowed Weaponry Techniques, Also can store more weapons than others. Only people with weaponry may have weapons with custom abilities or chakra conductive weaponry. There are various types of weaponry techniques such as:
•Kenjutsu / Bladed – Art of swords that focus on cutting and slicing.
•Projectiles – Long ranged such as bows and arrows and Ten-tens various weaponry techs
•Blunt – Obects such as staffs and things that focus on blunt damage.
•Piercing – Spears and items that focus on inflicting stabs and jabbing style of wounds.
•Exotic – Weapons that don't fit into any other categories.
Dominant Abilities
You are allowed 2 of the above categories. So basically what that means is you put weaponry as your skill specialty. And have kenjutsu and another type as your dom.
Is unapproved until these are fixed. Weaponry is a bold category encompassing the weapon types listed above, with a weaponry spec, you can have two of the weapon types. [i.e Kenjutsu/Ranged, ranged/exotic, etc] |
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squirrel101 Mizukage
Posts : 663 Join date : 2011-02-02 Age : 31 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue May 17, 2011 10:13 am | |
| - Quote :
- Skill Specialty Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Dominant: Kenjutsu Recessive: Weaponry Okay basically what LAD means is this. Instead it SHOULD look like this... - Quote :
- Skill Specialty:
Dominant: Weaponry Kenjutsu/bladed
(Insert other... either projectiles, blunt, piercing, or exotic) Recessive: That is an example. You won't have ANYTHING in your reccessive until you train for it. |
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue May 17, 2011 10:39 am | |
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squirrel101 Mizukage
Posts : 663 Join date : 2011-02-02 Age : 31 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue May 17, 2011 11:00 am | |
| You can choose one more. Either projectiles, blunt, piercing, or exotic. Which would you like? Also, after you choose replace it with what you put. Meaning "Swords" - Quote :
- Skill Specialty
Dominant: Weaponry Kenjutsu/bladed Projectiles Recessive: That is what is on my app. That is what you should have. |
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Osamu Rimaka C-Rank Criminal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2011-02-15 Location : In Konoha training with Goku to fight Ichigo
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue May 17, 2011 11:07 am | |
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squirrel101 Mizukage
Posts : 663 Join date : 2011-02-02 Age : 31 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue May 17, 2011 11:18 am | |
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Oblivion
Posts : 959 Join date : 2011-01-28 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished- Tue May 17, 2011 1:58 pm | |
| ThreadsStrength: 5 (+8) = 13 Dexterity: 5 (+7) = 12 Speed: 5 (+9) = 14 Stamina: 5 (+8) = 13 Total: 20 (+32) = 52 C-Rank MissionSpeed: 14 (+5.5) = 19.5New Total: 52 (+5.5) = 57.5C-RankDexterity: 12 (+9.5) = 21.5New Total: 57.5 (+9.5) = 67 D rank missionSpeed: 19.5+3= 22.5New Total: 70 |
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