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PostSubject: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyTue Feb 15, 2011 3:33 pm

Name: Eiji Hitomi
    Nickname/Aliases:"Souless"

Age:15
    Physical Age:15
    Mental Age:18

Gender: Male

||Appearance|


General Appearance: Eiji stands at 5 ft 6 and weighs about 120 pounds. With hair that is all black. His eyes are hazel brown. His nose is small and pointed. His lips are small and his teeth are white and straight. Eiji's physique is avearge and he has little muscle mass. His abs are not developed yet but can be seen a little from his training. His arms are well developed so thry are capable of holding a weapon twice his height.

Eiji wears a coat that was given to him by his father. His coat is whit and sleeveless. Although he is told to do so he hardly wears a shirt. When he does it's a black tank top with "Eiji Hitomi" written in Old English letters across the middle. On occasions Eiji wears fingerless gloves on both hands. The gloves are black wit ha white stripe going down the middle. Eiji's pants are brown but he alternates between wearing brown, black, red, gray, and dark blue. Most shinobi wear traditional ninja shoes but Eiji chooses to wear boots in the winter time and sneakers in the spring and summer time

    Height: 5'6
    Weight: 120 pounds
    Eye Color: Hazel Brown
    Hair Color & Style:Short and white

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||Rank Information|


Letter Rank: D rank
Ninja Rank: Genin

||Skill Information|



Elemental Affinity: Lighting
    Dominant: Lighting
    Recessive:



Skill Specialty Weaponry
    Dominant: Kenjutsu/Bladed
    Exotic
    Recessive:



Distribution Points:
    Strength: 13
    Dexterity: 21.5
    Speed: 22.5
    Stamina: 13
Total: 70


Special Characteristics:
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||Personality|


Overall Personality: Eiji is the type of person who has a strong sense of justice. Whenever someone is in danger even if he can't win he will still jump in and try to save them. On a day to day basis he will train for hours at a time and will not stop until the sunrises or sets. In public he has little friends due his intense training methods. He is also not to well with the ladies. Instead of trying to sway them he will confess his feelings without thinking.

If he sees something he wants he goes for it. He constantly announces what his plans are and how he will accomplish them reguardless of how out of reach they may seem. Everything Eiji does is in pursue of his dreams. Although he is far from it Eiji wishes to become the savior of the world one day and will constantly train and push his self until he sees that dream a reality. Eiji is also very family orientated. He spends time with his younger sister and brother. Also whenever he can he spends time with his oldest sister as well.

    Favorite Quote/Saying: "Those who have souls have morals"
    Hobby: Training
    Favorite Color: Dark Blue
    Fears: Being consumed by his own desire to become strong
    Goals: To become the savior of the world


||History|


Birthplace: Konoha
Previous Residence: Kumogakure
Clan: N/A
Family: Mother: Aoi Hitomi, Father: Senji Hitmi, Older Sister: Fumiko Hitmoi, Younger Brother: Dairou Hitomi, Younger Sister: Aura Hitmoi
History:
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Series/Game: King Of Fighters: Redux
Name: Orochi


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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyTue Feb 15, 2011 6:23 pm

  • Please include the Skill information into one post.
  • You are missing the Rank information section.
  • Include at least two paragraphs of description for the General Appearance area.
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 10:34 am

Arcadia wrote:
  • Please include the Skill information into one post.
  • You are missing the Rank information section.
  • Include at least two paragraphs of description for the General Appearance area.

I tried several times to put the skill information in one post but for some reason it didn't work.

When I try to edit it it shows the rank section up there.

I thought if I had a picture I didn't need to write two paragraphs?
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 11:14 am

Ohhh I see what you did there.

Fix the spoiler code for your gallery. Your accidentally placed the rank and skill information within the spoiler. I can then delete the second post so it makes more sense too. Sorry I didn't see that before. I'm busy in school at the moment so me or someone else will have to get back to this later tonight. Again, my apologies for not noticing that sooner and being busy.
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 12:01 pm

Arcadia wrote:
Ohhh I see what you did there.

Fix the spoiler code for your gallery. Your accidentally placed the rank and skill information within the spoiler. I can then delete the second post so it makes more sense too. Sorry I didn't see that before. I'm busy in school at the moment so me or someone else will have to get back to this later tonight. Again, my apologies for not noticing that sooner and being busy.

It's ok I should've payed more attention. I'm just SO eager to get into this story. I LOVE the plot!
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 11:16 pm

Please edit your skill information in your first post so that the second post can be removed. No sense in having the same information twice. Also, you may only have one skill spec, not two. Your skill specs are also the "Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu, etc" not "Strength, Chakra Control, etc". Those are your special characteristics.

You may only start out with 2 special characteristics, not 4.
Please revise that.

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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyThu Feb 17, 2011 9:13 am

Done and Done. Oh and Done
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyThu Feb 17, 2011 11:08 am

Approved but before I move your application, you should know that your image has malfunctioned.
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyThu Feb 17, 2011 12:33 pm

Damn photobucket. I found another one and changed up his appearence a little.
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyThu Feb 17, 2011 12:35 pm

Moved to the approved section
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyFri May 13, 2011 11:57 am

Edit: As D rank you can only start off with 2 special characteristics.

Quote :
Weaponry
Simple. People with this skill are marksman's, meaning their weapon aim, accuracy and use is near superb. Their targets hardly ever miss and they keep their tools in the best shape. Characters with this ability would be Ten-Ten. Allowed Weaponry Techniques, Also can store more weapons than others. Only people with weaponry may have weapons with custom abilities or chakra conductive weaponry. There are various types of weaponry techniques such as:

•Kenjutsu / Bladed – Art of swords that focus on cutting and slicing.

•Projectiles – Long ranged such as bows and arrows and Ten-tens various weaponry techs

•Blunt – Obects such as staffs and things that focus on blunt damage.

•Piercing – Spears and items that focus on inflicting stabs and jabbing style of wounds.

•Exotic – Weapons that don't fit into any other categories.

Dominant Abilities

You are allowed 2 of the above categories.

So basically what that means is you put weaponry as your skill specialty. And have kenjutsu and another type as your dom.

Is unapproved until these are fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyFri May 13, 2011 12:58 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyFri May 13, 2011 1:47 pm

squirrel101 wrote:
Edit: As D rank you can only start off with 2 special characteristics.

Quote :
Weaponry
Simple. People with this skill are marksman's, meaning their weapon aim, accuracy and use is near superb. Their targets hardly ever miss and they keep their tools in the best shape. Characters with this ability would be Ten-Ten. Allowed Weaponry Techniques, Also can store more weapons than others. Only people with weaponry may have weapons with custom abilities or chakra conductive weaponry. There are various types of weaponry techniques such as:

•Kenjutsu / Bladed – Art of swords that focus on cutting and slicing.

•Projectiles – Long ranged such as bows and arrows and Ten-tens various weaponry techs

•Blunt – Obects such as staffs and things that focus on blunt damage.

•Piercing – Spears and items that focus on inflicting stabs and jabbing style of wounds.

•Exotic – Weapons that don't fit into any other categories.

Dominant Abilities

You are allowed 2 of the above categories
.

So basically what that means is you put weaponry as your skill specialty. And have kenjutsu and another type as your dom.

Is unapproved until these are fixed.


Weaponry is a bold category encompassing the weapon types listed above, with a weaponry spec, you can have two of the weapon types. [i.e Kenjutsu/Ranged, ranged/exotic, etc]
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyTue May 17, 2011 10:13 am

Quote :
Skill Specialty Weaponry/Kenjutsu

Dominant: Kenjutsu
Recessive: Weaponry

Okay basically what LAD means is this. Instead it SHOULD look like this...

Quote :
Skill Specialty:

Dominant: Weaponry
Kenjutsu/bladed

(Insert other... either projectiles, blunt, piercing, or exotic)
Recessive:

That is an example. You won't have ANYTHING in your reccessive until you train for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Eiji Hitomi -Finished-   Eiji Hitomi -Finished- EmptyTue May 17, 2011 11:00 am

You can choose one more. Either projectiles, blunt, piercing, or exotic. Which would you like? Also, after you choose replace it with what you put. Meaning "Swords"

Quote :
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Dominant: Weaponry
Kenjutsu/bladed
Projectiles
Recessive:

That is what is on my app. That is what you should have.
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I chose another
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Strength: 5 (+8) = 13
Dexterity: 5 (+7) = 12
Speed: 5 (+9) = 14
Stamina: 5 (+8) = 13
Total: 20 (+32) = 52

C-Rank Mission
Speed: 14 (+5.5) = 19.5
New Total: 52 (+5.5) = 57.5

C-Rank
Dexterity: 12 (+9.5) = 21.5
New Total: 57.5 (+9.5) = 67

D rank mission
Speed: 19.5+3= 22.5
New Total: 70
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