(I'm not sure if this is where this goes, or how long it has to be, but I'll do what I can to get this right)

Ailanna awoke from a deep night's sleep because of a nightmare. She was flustered from the dream that showed her out in the field with other ninja, and all of them getting injured and there was nothing she could do about it. She disliked that thought. She looked out of her window and saw the sun just about to rise. It's around four. Perhaps I should head to the hospital and see if they need help. That should clear my mind. She quickly got dressed and rushed over to the hospital.

She arrived and walked to the front counter. The secretary greeted her, "Hi Ailanna! Back to help with the new patients again?" Ailanna smiled, "Of course! Nothing clears my mind more than helping those in need." She walked through the double doors and met up with the doctor she usually worked with. He was a tall handsome ninja who had short brown hair, beautiful green eyes, and was slightly built. Ailanna thought him to be very gorgeous. Some would even say she had a crush on him. He looked to her and smiled, "Hello again Ail. We got a lot of patients today and I'd like to teach you something. It will help you in the long run." She blushed slightly and smiled. He wants to teach me something? I wonder what it is.

He took her to one of the patients who wasn't badly injured. "Ailanna, come stand next to me." Ailanna walked over to the doctor. He told Ailanna to put her hands over the patient as if she were going to monitor his injuries. She did as she was told and the doctor said, "Ok, now what I want you to do is, I want you to focus yourself. See if you can add some of your energy to this man, with the intent to remove his injuries." She looked to the doctor, "You want me to..... heal him?" the doctor nodded so she did what she could. It took her about a half hour of constantly trying to focus her energy into the man before he was healed of his injuries.

The man sat up and thanked Ailanna and walked back to the front desk. The doctor smiled at Ailanna and she smiled back. "I did it!" she said with excitement. The doctor smiled, "You did. I'm proud of you." Ailanna jumped up and down and those thoughts from the dream were long gone. She was so happy that now, even if an ally fell in battle, she could restore their ability to fight. She stayed to heal a few more patients, each time taking less energy, less focus, and less time than the last. She stayed until all the patients were healed and she had the technique memorized. She then headed home and went back to sleep, never to have that nightmare again.

(483 words. I hope that's enough.)

No, this is not the right area. If this is a training post, Then post it like a regular RP session, label the title saying its training, then put the jutsu/s that you are training at the top of the RP before starting, maybe even in a spoiler.

Also, you need to have the jutsu approved before you start to learn it. No point in learning a jutsu only to find out that it's going to be approved, right?

A third note as I move this to an IC spot, you dont need to train your first set of jutsu, you can simply put them in a topic in the jutsu section with no training required.

Well, I did the training and the jutsu already, so I figured if the jutsu was approved, than the training link was already there. Here's the link for the jutsu.
http://shinobireality.heavenforum.org/t364-healing-technique#1636
I put it in Technique Creation

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